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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot!! I want Blaise Zabini in my bed now!!! and please don't apologize for smut but write it more & more & more!!!!!!! please update ASAP xax Oh and I can't wait for a nice Neville and Luna scene and a right good smutty Draco and Hermione scene ;)
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh don't feel sorry - that was some well-placed smut!

great fic btw and I love that you update so quickly.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FUCK HELLZ YEAH!!! You have made this now favorite story to turn to! I fucking love YOU!!! LOL!!!!!

I aboslutly LOVE Blaise and Ginny together. *bigg goofy grin*

Great two updates. The sex is deliciously smuttastic.

Can't wait for your next ones. *grins* Keep em coming. *pun intended*
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, the scene with Blaise and Ginny was hot. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 was sooo good, I'm glad that the chapters are getting longer. This story is really really good. Please update soon!!!!!!!
person mhaj78
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Re: ch. 9--OMFG don't ever APOLOGIZE for pure smut! Are you KIDDING me? That was AWESOME!! It was totally perfect, you captured the physical response and the emotional...HOT HOT HOT. Whew. I am SO glad things will be different for Ginny with Blaise--and that Neville apparently has him thinking that he's honestly turned traitor. Great job!!
person mhaj78
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was huge.

That was intense and sooo incredibly emotional. Wow.

I feel both tearful and exhausted after reading this! This story is AMAZING. I absolutely love this--like you wouldn't even believe!

Again, I find myself almost too emotional for words. But here's my shot at being coherent:

++I'm so glad that he rescued her from Lestrange. Oh my gosh, that scene was heart-wrenching.
++I'm curious to see more about what the spell was that she looked up and memorized.
++Is there really something in the food/water? I didn't think there was! I think it's just the trauma of what they've been through.
++Again, I'm glad that Ginny isn't being abused by Blaise, even if she is being sucked in by the Veela pheromones or whatever.

This has seriously moved to the top of my list of favorite stories to read. It's official. I adore the sex scenes, the emotional drama, the intense, raw passion from different sources--love, hate, fear, pride, etc.

You seriously don't know how MUCH I lvoe it. Thansk for ch.10 being so long, too!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What's gonna happen now? Can't wait to find out!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love!
person reirei
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
errr? In short.. I want to correct the error but I dont understand. Email me if you like so I can fix, and or be aware of the problem Eppie. rragosta@tvtraffic.com.


Thanks!