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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

person Carine
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi ReiRei,
ok,this time you MADE me SPEECHLESS.
I finally looked up the word "malestrom" in the dictionary because in the beginning I thought that the term refered to male like opposite to female,bur now that I know the exact meaning I must say that you really starked off an enormous malesttrom to the human abysses by initiating this story.I love real dark stories so much but the intensity of your bright writening just makes the grafic scenes even seem more realistic and therefor brutalizing.(This is not a negatif critic,by no means!)I just adore your plots and your diction and I just didn't feel quite well at the idea of writing a funny review of these last two chapters.I bow in respect to your ability of exploring the whole,complexe range of human emotions in your winderful stories.LOL Sureves Epans
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your a fantastic writer
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor draco

person jaycee
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I can't wait for the update. I normally don't read the darker fics, but this one has got me intrigued...I hope that Hermione doesn't go through with it though!
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I nearly did it again, I was so close to reviewing chapter 10 (which I loved btw), when I noticed chapter 11 was up and ready for me to continue with this amazing fic. I am feeling so many emotions to the point were I want to take over Hermione's body and tell Draco...on behalf of Hermione of course...;).. that I love him and we should run off together!! because they do love eachother.....don't they?!! anyway 'Harry's here to save the day!!!' (hopefully) I'm also intrigued as to who Nia is and what will happen with Dr and Herm next so please keep your promise of an update tomorrow xax
person mhaj78
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY EFFING GOSH

YOU BETTER UPDATE TOMORROW OR I WILL DIE, SIMPLY DIE.

I am seriously in shock, breathing hard, appalled, aroused, and freaking out...all at the same time! WOW. That was bloody intense.

How in the world do you make each chapter better than the last? How? That was...heartbreaking. But perfect. The sex scene was shocking and sad. It was inevitable that Lestrange get what he wants, though...it does break my heart though, b/c I know Draco cared/cares for her, dang it! Even if it's all supposed to be an act...but she's unselfish and giving to the end...even giving herself, her actual self and a piece of her soul, no doubt, to sell her body like that for the chance at helping the other kids escape.

And oh my gosh Narcissa! Oh sadness...so apparently she knew Nia, though. Hmmm, interesting.

Whew. I swear, when you finish this story, which I hope is forever away (only b/c I want it to go forever--remember, I'm holding you to your promise to update tomorrow!) I'm reading it all over from start to finish. I saved yours to read last today--again! It's my piece de resistance of fanfiction currently! Hot!
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just found your story and read the entire thing in between trick or treaters...what an evil cliffie! i can't wait to read more! excellent story, very original and erotic...i was wishing i was with lestrange!
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was awesome. I came home from my friends' house and didn't think you'd update this quickly. Love the chaper, hun.
person Carine
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi ReiRei,
do not EVER again apologize for good smut,but simply write it...Sureves Epans