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Sometimes length isn't necessary. You packed a lot in this chapter IMO. I'm so glad you update so frequently...looking forward to seeing what Hermione really plans on doing, how Neville is going to help, and what Draco may do to turn this whole thing upside down....he's a wild card right now!

Ooooh...very nice. Interesting to see Blaise's thoughts when he's patroling. I'm hoping he realizes Draco's right and finds a way to make things right. I'd hate to see Blaise stay on Voldemort's side. Then again...it's your fic so who am I to tell you what to write? ;)

Great update, can't wait for the next one.

Oh my god they were two of your best updates EVER!!!! I thought Nia was Voldemort's snake for some reason. She said she was fed on rats and Draco's mum died of snake poisoning, but I'm probably way out lol xx anyway keep up with these excellent updates xax Don't let Draco die (obviously!) xx

Awww...poor Hermione..please don't let Carrow and Lestrange do too much damage. Angst is right..this chapter was too much! can't these two please have a happy ending?

come hurry yp and post more i wanna see what happens hurry.I LOVE IT.

PLEASE HURRY
I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

Oooh...things getting a bit more interesting. Great update.

I just finished what you have sofar.. wow.. It's so dark and disturbing and surprisingly sexy. I am kind of concerned with myself for liking this so much lol. But it is really good, very angsty, definitely like nothing I have ever read before. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I feel so sorry for Draco and Hermione in there current situation...especially Hermione. I just think that they both obviously have such strong feeling's for each other but nothing can be done until Voldemort is defeated really...well that's what I'm thinking, please update ASAP thanks xax

Why edit? It's perfect. Another perfect chapter to add to this fic. can't wait for your next update.

I'm with Lexy Malfoy--no need for edits, it's perfect!

I love how you're keeping us on the edge, usually it makes me NUTS (and it definitely is driving me close to the edge now) but I think that's what makes this so insanely amazing of a story! I was seriously trying to read as slowly as possible to make it last, gasping out loud, and trying to not to get teary!! OH and when she grabbed HIS WAND...omg. My mind started spinning as to all the different ways the scene could end--and I NEVER would have guessed it to go the way it did!! WOWOWOWOWOW. There you go again, keeping us guessing, always on the edge of our seats! (the couch, in my case)

So she has to serve detention--but it's only for an hour--so I wonder what that will be. And Draco jumped to defend her destruction of Lestrange's wand immediately--wonder if he's realized yet that it would potentially have a unicorn hair inside of it? And seriously, what a stupid man for leaving it behind.

I'm anxious to see about ... detention ... will she really take the mark ... what's up with Neville now (and Harry, Ginny, Blaise, Nia, ... but I don't want to NOT have a chapter with a Hermione/Draco interaction! They're sooo my faves) ... how the rest of the school is doing ... and when does Draco find out about his mom. So much going on--I love it! Thanks for updating today. I can't check at work so waited ALL DAY to get home to see if you had updated!! Made my day!