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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i agree with you with what you said about hermione. she's passionate and couragious, she even knows how how to deal with submission. update soon! i love your story!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chile' this chapter was a doozy...I heard myself saying oooooooo ooooo several times. I totally agree with you, Hermione isn't really OOC as much as cracking under the strain of her situation. I really see darkness in all of the trio so I'm glad you went there. I hope that bitch Romilda dies...the whole Hermione turning dark reminds me a bit of Anakin but I hope she can be saved and doesn't join the dark side...keep the quick updates coming!!!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapters but chapter 19 sorta hit on a personal tragedy of my own so I cried buckets, I'm slowly getting over it now though. So is the child Hermione?!! update soon please xx
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that is intence!! I can't wait for another update though. It is a fantastic story plot.

Sasha
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks ReiRei, but honestly it was a while ago and yes it destroyed me for a bit, but I've had a little boy since then but unfortunately I lost a baby exactly a year ago now and it took it out of me for a while I mean I only went back into work three weeks ago I thanked you in time lost for helping through my 'down' time cause your stories have helped me see my life through another better life, it may seem strange to you and maybe others that read this review but I don't care, as long as I'm feeling good again for not only myself but my family that's all that matters right?!! I hope when this story finishes you decide to write many more, in my eyes you are very talented and I feel like I should be paying to read your work!!! I'm off ill today hence the longer reviews lol anyway please update soon luv Angel xx
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I have a suggestion for you.
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I hope you give the site a shot I am sure you will like it.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah baby!!! I'm loving the progression of this....I think I know who that baby is...lol. I hope it's who I think it is anyway. This story is so damn good...Anything for Draco huh Hermione? That's so damn sexy...I hope when they get out of this mess (please tell me they do) he reminds her she said that ;>)
person Damiana
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! That latest plot twist (chapter 19) bowled me over! So angsty but so intense...whee!

I understand why you don't have a beta (considering the amount of text that you put out in such short periods of time) but your writing would gain so much from it... Well I can't promise anything but I could try to beta for you.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, I loved it...did she manage to overcome the pull of the vertiserum and tell voldemort what he wanted to hear? she didn't really stay behind for Draco, she stayed behind because she was tied up...and Voldemort called her a "so called mudblood". does he know something that we don't??????
person janl
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are doing such a great job! And I'm so glad that you're adding chapters so fast. It makes it so much easier to keep in the flow of the story! Thanks for writing it, you're very talented.