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by reirei

person reirei
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soft Obsidian - On Time lost I had a one page paragraph that basically outlined what I wanted to do. That was necessary so I could stay canon but basically everything else was as it goes.

This story is completely out of my @ss. I had a wild hair to do a draco/hermione story. Also, I had no idea Snape was alive until you guys did. I just thought.. BRILLIANT! hehe. Also, how he stayed alive, um, that i thought of today. I just thought, what would I do if I were a snarky bastard?


Thanks for the reviews your the best!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Those last couple of chapter updates were amazing, the Snape thing was excellent wouldn't of guessed!! you have got an excellent imagination and discriptive mind, lovin all your stories just read your 2 part fanfic that was so!! good update soon please xax
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was excellent!!! now i can't wait to see her pregnant and i wonder who's it will be???? your story is really turning out to be exciting and i always look forward to new chapters! great job!
person kalderas
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah, i just looked over my previous review, see how cranky i get when i don't get my shudeye? manipulative author. practically STOLE my kettle! well never fear, i still have my coffee-maker, and you're NOT getting ur mits on that. >;P have i complimented u on the delightful banter in the chaps w/ the whole gang yet? well its brilliant, did wonders to give the mood a lighter air. much of it is b/c of blaise and luna. i juss luv how casual the are wen everyone else's inna strop. im actually glad that u didnt go the vampire route. those fics are fun, what w/ snape basically being this greasy bat to begin with, but it's not at all feasible. besides i like to think it wasnt a stroke of luck but his cunning thats kept him alive. so glad u've put mariah in. when ever snape and mione are inna fic together, no matter how far it would stray frm the story line, i want them together, i juss luv the couple. so u giving snape a lady is helping meh squash those feelings, if juss for this fic. gosh, from the way gin carries on, u'd think she wasnt the one so doped up on pheromones and lust potion she could see the forest for the trees. i always kinda question how hard she fought against it, though it prob wasn't her fault. geez, when dumbledore was around atleast he knew the prophecy and who his spies were. im always a little on edge b/c of this lack of communication...u're doing it on purpose, meany... so lets see, seven, excluding harry and nia, herm/dray, luna/nev, blaise/gin, and sev makes seven. wooh, glad mariahs not suddenly in the prophecy, that would be stretching it. ok, enough of my ramblings, update asap missy. ^.^v
person reirei
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kalderas!!!!!!! Hehe, read my little side challenge fic. I think you will enjoy and wont throw any kitchenware. You're so bloody clever! I wont say about what, but you know it so...laddeda.
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
way to short!!!! waaaaaaa!!!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Four new chapters... I am on like a fanfiction reading spree tonight or something lol. This just keeps getting better and better. Now that they have escaped... and Snape is Lestrange.... omg! I can't wait for more! I never know where this story is going I just love it so much!
person kalderas
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*falls to the floor* HOLY HELL! IM TOTALLY GOBSMACKED! my marvelously malevolent madman is none other than slimy sinister slytherin! ...i hav a knack for alliteration...so snape the daywalking vamp? i suppose zombie is another possibility. eeeew! slimy indeed. r u channeling ms. figg's latest fic? if i guessed right u hav completely made it ur own, complete with a new prophecy and all. GODS PEOPLE UR ALL ON THE SAME SIDE STOP BICKERING!! can't some one for once be honest and up front? one peek into blaise's mind could make this all so much simpler. snape's alive, blaise is a spy for the light,(for his own ends, not the greater good, but still)draco's thrown everything accept hermione to the wind, there's a new prophecy, and dumbledore orchestrated it all! *gasp* kinda makes ur head spin. UNITY, SACRIFICE, AND LOVE PEOPLE! UR NOT GONNA ACCOMPLISH THAT IF UR ALWAYS AT EACH OTHERS THROATS! (although i think snape has sacrificed enough for everyone, it should b crossed off the list) *throws kettle* SEE WHAT U DID?! I WAS DOIN JUSS FINE WHEN I KNEW THE STORY WAS HOPELESS ANGST! NOW THERE'S IS HOPE BUT EVERYONE'S HEADS ARE TOO FAR UP THEIR OWN ASSES TO SEE IT!! GRAAH! it's a pity really, dray and herm love eachother, but can only admit it when they're near death or semi-conscious b/c they've *cough draco* have lied too many times for either to believe the other. (im gonna be inconsolable wen harry and nia bite the dust) they need to have a veritaserum induced heart to heart, all of them not just d/h. all expect luna and nev their fine. haha, aint it funny looney's probably the only one who could take all that info i was just ranting about in stride. and did she lose the baby? geez what a clusterfuck, thats what this entire fic is. man, ^^ i really went all out this time huh? 'til next time sweets. >;^
person Neko-chan
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, so I've read your story from the begining and ALWAYS look forward to updates. I have yet to review but now feel the need to profess my undying love for you and your story. Draco/Hermione is my first fav pairing, followed closely by Snape/Hermione. Upon finding out that Snape was Lestrange I lept out of my chair and began screaming "Snape is ALIVE!" and "Snape is Lestrange." Thus making my younger sister give me odd looks. But I SO don't care! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. And whom the baby belongs to. I am almost certian it's Draco's but now I won't mind too much if it's "Lestrange's." OH and did I mention the whole Harry/Nagini bit, Pure Brillince! And Ginny and Blasie, is love in the air???

Keep up the great work, and update ASAP, for without it I will die.

Megan
A Mudblood Slytherin and DAMN proud to call Severus Snape my Head of House!
Mischief Managed!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is quickly becoming my favorite story on this site! It started out as just smut and is now becoming so much more! I love it and keep up the good work!