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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again with the excellent updates keep em comin!!! I felt so sorry for Ginny though xx
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter...you are right about snape being sexy...i definately like him as well...lol. are you going to use blaise to get to snape to get the book so that hermione doesn't have to go back to the castle, or is she going to go and get caught and have to face voldemort again?? can't wait to see what you do...
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
jeeze! race is always such a touchy subject...i realize that you can be any color and being of any ethnicity...when i read i was under the impression that she was talking about an italian man, the traditional dark hair dark skin eats pasta...blah blah blah...i know that before jkr announced him as being a black man it was assumed he was italian...i was just wondering if she had heard that...not a big deal...
person kalderas
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...titties...hahaha! phew, heh, sry i can't take anything seriously after the word titty. pphhhfft, aha...ok, ok, im over it. jesus ginny! have some decorum! damn veela pheromones! SHE MUST INVEST IN SOME NOOSE PLUGS! aaw, poor gin, im sorry i had mean thoughts about about u. she shoulda juss had her way w/ him while he was tied up. i kept thinkin', warp it up someone's gonna walk in. i'm glad it was luna and they had pretty much finished. so blaise does hava heart, he could still do w/ a bit of humbling. duss gin kno he's a veela w/ the pheromone thing? someone should tell her, mayb she'd feel less guilty. boy is she gonna b pissed when that cats outa the bag. ooo, twirly twists, u may not kill harry and nia. what'll that do to the prophecy? y does mione hav to do everything herself? UR KNOCK-UP AND HAV THIS POTION IN U THAT DRAWS VOLDY TO YA! PERHAPS UR NOT THE BEST CANDIDATE FOR THIS MISSION! lock her in the broom closet and send blaise, he's the spy. do ur job mr italiano! get supplies and report to snape,2 birds one stone. the trick is getting ppl to trust him w/ this. ooo, i guessed something right did i. *blushes w/ pride* and ur dabbling w/ challenges. i'll look see. though u may b tricking me outa a pot, i'll take the gamble. update as per usual. ^0_-^v
person kalderas
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
here we go again! simultaneously reviewing and updating. well at least we're consistent. ooo, i like this girl. typical snape, i don't love him any less. wouldn't it suck if b/c he's bound he cant take the potion and someone finds him as snape. gasp! but u wouldnt b that cruel...would you? clever lil mione, so glad she remembered the map. i hope she catches up with her. run mariah run!!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eh too short..lol...don't be a tease! You know Snape grosses me out...but it's nice to know you're giving him a personality and heart. It'll be interesting to see how survives this...maybe even come away with a girlfriend? that man needs a steady lay!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really getting into the thick of things huh? May I say once again just how happy I am that Snape is alive? Yay! Also, just out of curiosity, what exactly did he mean by all bets were off if Hermione was pregnant with his baby? Does he want her? Does he have feelings for her? Obviously he lusted after her, but if that's all it was, why would he necessarily care if Draco's willing and wanting to keep her with him regardless? Just curious....Can't wait for the next update!
person reirei
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AcK!!!!!!!! Kalderas. I dont want to give anything away but I really, really dislike VAMPIRE fiction. So no, I am not channeling Ms. Figgs idea, although, if I had to channel an idea of her brilliant mind, it would definitely be the one where Hermione does all the charachters from Hogwarts to get rid of a sexual spell backlash.. HILARIOUS!!!! ANywho, just thought I would say that. Also, I happen to like it when you throw kitchen ware at me. I have been plotting mischeviously as to how to get you to do that again. yay! I suceeded.
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Stop making me laugh, I'm at work....Blaise is too funny...go Draco risk life and limb for sex...but we know better, Draco is in love...is Blaise?
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What I really wanna know is...do you write this shit off the top of your head or do you have this whole story already written and are just teasing us. Your updates are crazy fast...at any rate, the whole thing with Snape not going to Voldemort because he knows Voldemort will kill him sounds more realistic than what happened in DH IMO. RIP Snape...but please please don't let Hermione be pregnant with his child...gross!