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for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

by reirei

schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just started reading your story a couple of days ago and I just have to tell you, it's AMAZING!! I can't believe how many twists and turns this story has taken. Just when I was thinking all hope was lost, it wasn't! And just when you got me beliving that Harry could live, you twisted it so now he can't!! And Snape, omg, SNAPE!! I love how you let him live, it just seems so much more like Snape than the actual book did!! I have no idea what Draco just did, but I can't wait to find out!!

*starts watching the monitor for the next chaper*
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a horrible cliffhanger!!! Is draco going to redeem himself by taking them all to the healing waters and lure voldemort there? you leave it like he's a butt, but he is our hero, and hermione could never fall in love with a looser...she see's the good in him that nobody else, even himself, can see. so even if you don't use that scenario, you will have him do something heroic and brave...right???
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its amazing...i cant wait to see what he did

i keep thinking it involves rewriting the past...but i doubt it lol

post more soon!
~Cait
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to guess probably that he apparated them to or got whatever they needed from india to rid Voldemort of his connection to Harry and Nia but I really don't know. When I read about Draco trying to be the hero but just basically being an egotistical prick I thought maybe he'd done something really stupid and banished them from the world all together but that would probably be the end of the story..so not a very smart guess lol xx by the way I love how Draco looked out for Hermione before she went back to Hogwarts...so sweet!!!!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thinking on your last amazing story I think Anon might have a good guess/idea!!

Anon - I know you've probably read *Time Lost* but if not check it out, it's one of my favourite's...absolutely amazing fic!!!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just mean! I so wish I was insightful enough to see what you are doing here, but you continue to surprise me completely, so I'm not even going to try to guess. I hope you can post again tonight this one is just killing me!
person kittycat30
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did he run off to kill Voldie? hhhmmm, don't make me wait too long!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah! i knew that draco couldn't be a butt! he was so sweet to give her what she wanted, and then what she needed! lol...can't wait for the next update...when will you reveal who the father of the baby is???

on one hand you want draco to be it because of happily ever after and all that...
but then, severus needs a baby to love...he would make a good dad...

then of course, tom riddle before voldy was hot so he would at least produce a beautiful baby and hermione could teach it to be normal...

or, the fertility potion could have gone haywire and its tripplets and all three men are dads...although that by be a bit out there...or not, lol
person Ella
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is all kinds of awesome..... love all the pairings so far...wouldnt mind snape getting with mariah, he seemed upset that she truely didnt want him so i see some potential there...but really great story, just hanging for an udate
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...I was way off..lol. I didn't think you could make a entire place disapear..but this is Draco we're talking about : ) That was really cute. I hope Blaise and Ginny end up together, and the whole Neville/Luna thing seems unresolved, I'd like to see Neville knock it out of the park Draco style. Thanks for the Draco/Hermione smut, you know we need our daily fix. Has he told her he loves her yet or does he just plan on going through their relationship communicating his feelings by fucking her into the mattress? I mean I wouldn't mind but maybe Hermione needs more than that...lol