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oh this thing with Snape and Mariah has lots of potential....OK you got me, it's even sexy! Maybe once Mariah finds out Snape is actually a spy she'll be more open to other things ;>) He's such a tragic character...but he's still raping her, not cool, well, unless she ends up like it..lol. So, are they just gonna hide out in India until they figure out what's going on...does Nia get to meet any family while she's there or are they all dead? A friend of mine went to India last year and said it changed her life, it's supposed to be lots of real magic in the air...is there something in India that will help them get outta this mess or better yet enhance their sexual escapades? lol

humm i feel strange. I am almost feeling sorry for Snape. im not so sure i want him to die a horrible death now. Maybe just to be terrible hurt.

LOL Titfortat!!!!!!!! He is terribly hurt. hehe.

Well i never this story has left me guessing all the way though. First Hermione being Ravenclaw and Slytherins daughter. ( I really hope you explore that a bit more in this story cus I have to say that was an amazing plot twist and really worked well.) Snape is alive and is living as lastrange. Mind you I know that snarky bastard would turn up sooner or latter. Oh please let him suffer a horrible death like being eatern by rats slowly. ( As you can tell not a massive Snape fan.)
Finaly Draco and Hermione have gone off some where hot to shag like rabbits. ( If you read some of my other rewiews you will see I always wanted them to go to tim buk too and make loads of bushy haired blonde children. I know they are in Indnia but hey close enough.)

That all adds up as a great piece of work in my book so I highly look forwrd to your next chapter and to see where this roller coster ride takes me.

I LUV it! Yet again another brilliant chapter! I love everything that youa re doing with the story and I like being suprised so I don't have any real suggestions. Just that I would really like to know who the daddy is. I know it is coming but I am excited about that! I love fics where Hermione and Draco have children.

wow this story is going in so many directions...something new and exciting everyday!! Please update soon!!!

oh..that's sad...I hate thinking about Fred. That was the wrongest death in DH by far...but yay for Slytherin/Gryffindor love : ) I like these new OFC's Nia and Mariah, well Nia isn't really new but I like her human form and Mariah sounds like she could be a complex character, we hardly ever see any Slytherin girls depicted outside of Pansy and Millicent....Draco needs to man up, stop doubting, & tell Hermione what's up! Can't wait to see his reaction though when he finds out it was Snape shagging Hermione...I guess we won't find out whose baby it is until the end eh?

i love snape, and he is only doing what he must to survive...besides that, what man wouldn't take advantage of the situation to get what he has been lusting after?

that was a sad chapter...

No Draco..NO! that was a evil cliffy!

Who knows what goes through that wicked mind of yours but since you asked for suggestions, here's my 1 cent-

You could have Draco challenge Voldy to a duel but that seems too simple...ah..maybe have Draco try to challenge Voldemort to a duel only to be intercepted by Snape still disguised as Lestrange. Snape wins the wand from Draco to the pleasure of Voldy and when Voldy asks Lestrange to finish the job, instead of killing Draco he turns and kills Voldy. Scratch that, Snape couldn't kill Voldy with the elder wand because you can't use it unless you're not being selfish right? I have to re-read DH.

OK another idea, the wand can't be given away or stolen, it has to be won in battle right? If it's possible, Snape should reveal himself to Draco (but that may open another can of worms with the whole Lestrange/Hermione thing). But after all the drama of that revelation, they can reconcile and Draco could let Snape know what's going on. Then Snape and Draco could arrange for an rightful exchange of the wand into Snape's hands by agreeing to a some sort of wand duel. Snape being the older and wiser of the two would naturally win the elder wand from Draco fair and square and be armed to kill Voldy just like he's been craving to do, only this time he will be doing it with the knowledge he will be saving others as well. Then you bring my Draco back to his girl Hermione safe and unharmed while Snape goes to battle with Voldemort in the ultimate duel of duels.

But Elder wand or not there are still two horocruxes, so this could go a dozen different ways..you've made a devious plot device out of a canon plot device! So then the question is, will the elder want make a bit of difference if Harry and Nia are still alive? Hermione has to work her magic before anyone goes up against Voldy or he'll just keep coming back right? You know that would be interesting too...Draco goes to kill Voldy only to come back to the joke shop to find Voldy popping out of Nia or Harry like some sort of Alien movie..lol.

Eh, I don't know, I'm rambling now.....whatever you do, just make sure my Draco doesn't die or get disfigured ; )