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by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw, so sweet.
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol cute :)
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Very cute. :D For oncec I wasn't slow and caught on when Hermione did about how they are able to tame their respective partners. Nice job with the touches between Harry and Draco as well.
person Diane
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw that's just cute. So that's how you put Draco on a leash. Oh, I love the comment about both of them walking carefully. So... Harry's Batman now? *snicker* Comes in, saves the day. Sounds like Batman.
person evalhanne
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute. That's all I have to say about it.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one I'll keep short because it's 3:30 in the morning and I need to get to bed.

You have a wonderful way with oneshots. You protray all the emotions need to make it felt and very little at the same time as not to overpower it. With such a short piece you are able to give it the feel of a whole story with a lot less readig time. You have a great talent, that I've not learned. Use it wisely and tuant those who can't. Lol

Nicole
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person Myra
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha. That was sweet :) Loved it.
person NightLo
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really, I want to trade a small place with one of those to watch the two...even though Hermione is always good, this time, I find it difficult to agree....I am so jealous!!!
person freelancer360
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh cute story...I love how they keep each other in check.
person fragonknight01
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet. I quite enjoyed reading it.