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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it is a good start but it seems kinda incomplete, like it should be the first chapter rather than the only chapter, but still good
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm shattered! How heartbreaking! To know that you carry even the tiniest bit of blame!
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sitting here balling my eyes out...You nailed it please tell me that there is more to this
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. The only problem I saw was all the spelling errors. Keep up the great work.
Kat
Kat
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOT GOOD AT SAD!!! I CRIED!!
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great I can feel Draco's heart breaking as he's talking to Severus. The way you left it leaves it open for the reader to chose his next move. Bravo..........Jet
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think that is one of the saddest oneshots ive read. i cried. i got my bed wet because of my tears. you did really good. continue the good work.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're so MEAN.
It was still good though.
It was still good though.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It would have been nice if you put Harry in a very long coma to get back at Draco, instead of killing him w/ those as his last thoughts.
So sorry. That just made me so sad. It's not that I don't like it. I do love it but i'm just a sucker for happy ending.
So sorry. That just made me so sad. It's not that I don't like it. I do love it but i'm just a sucker for happy ending.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too sad.