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for Your Letter

by Jan

person Deanna Lynn
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T^T
you made me cry!!!!! TT^TT

lovely story, strong in emotion, and i dont fully blame you...
i blame being pregnant! damn kids!
the emotion that i read from draco truely was... was... well, short of awe-inspiring. the love that i felt from the letter was truely something to behold and i was hoping youd write something of that type again.

truely brill.
person poohbear74
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can not leave it here!

It must go on!
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are so heartless....no happy ending...bad evil author (very good writing, I almost cried) WAAAAAA!!!!!
person Selene89
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you evil person you story made me cry... :')
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS! This was a great oneshot. Beautifully written and the angst was brilliant. The first one that I've ever cried. Keep up the great work. KaiDragon ^-^
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my god....
emotional much... me i mean, i got tears... nicely done
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really emotionally powerful.
Nice work. :)
person Wilder
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! you did an amazing job with the emotion in this thing. i love the letter, you could have put a little more of vernon in it to add another dimension of pain to it, but you did a great job... i was crying by the time sev was making the unbreakable vow cause i knew what was coming. it is a great one shot and you could even write another story about Deon sometime... how he grew up with draco and sev, and maybe meeting his daddy's ghost or something... you wrote perfect angst story, thanx!
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! finally read one of your stories, and IT WAS NOT BAD YOU LIAR!!!! Seriously, your so much better than me....sniff sniff, show me the ways of the force MASTER! TRAIN ME IN THE ART OF FANFICTION!!!!

Fai.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to be prefectly honest but in truth I think it will come out as overly harsh so in short I say: Good try.

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com