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for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Melissa
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read the updates... since the Weasley story had been updated so frequently as well I lost track. I love it. I have no idea how much farther you plan to go with this, an epilogue or yet another twist, but I promise I'll be along for the ride.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Updates!! Loved both new chapters, excellent as always! ^___^
person ElenSila
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I hope that you add a couple chapters of conclusion. I do however think I should mention you use the phrase "drank it down" and "swallowed it down" a lot. This phrase is a little akward and odd. I just want to make you aware of the frequencey with which these phrases appear in your writing. Otherwise, I really enjoy your writing and I absolutely adore you plots, they are original and inventive, something not often found in Fan Fiction. Keep up the writing.

Elen
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Elen. I'll keep an eye out for that in the future. :) Good looking out and glad you enjoyed the story.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! ^___^
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending! Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us and I can't wait for the next one!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! That was sooooo evil! you big meanie. love the story. you are awesome.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe, excellent chapter. ^___^
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's just cruel to leave it there.....can't wait for the next one!