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EWE!!! HAHAHA!!! i personally like stories where they hook up years later (usually makes more sense of them falling for each other), and they have some other experiences to bring to the table, but i can do without the thought of hermione and ron getting it on. am i the only one who sees that that relationship would just be doomed?? a guy with a mommy syndrome marrying a woman who wouldn't want to stay at home? ech.

And she's back! With a definite juicy tidbit, no less! Sounds promising (though I'm sure you hear that often enough). I look foward to where this one is going . . . and perhaps, an original character or two could make a small appearance . . . *cough* Adam Sweetmeats & Victor *cough*.

Again, great beginning!

Dragonkisser: Of course Adam and Victor will be in the story. They're vampires. lol. Besides, their names have been slung around on the boards quite a few times in the past few months. I can take a hint. That's probably why this scenario even came to me. lol. But there are a few Adam-haters out here too, so sorry you guys. Well, I've spent the day creating this new vampire hierarchy and I'll give you the basic run down how they are created. Firstly, there are species of Vampires. They're not all the same in origin or power or weaknesses. Keeps them interesting.

A Mother or Queen Vampire is created by some great evil force or demon, usually because of a vicious lifestyle or a deal of some sort. There are no King Vampires for some reason in this particular species. lol.

Mother - Creates Primary Vampires. The most intelligent, independent and powerful. Can be influenced but not completely controlled by the Mother.

Primary - Creates Secondary Vampires. Not as intelligent as Primaries, are controllable by Mothers and Primaries, though the Primary can override the Mother if his/her influence is strong enough

Secondary - Creates Minions. Least intelligent, most animalistic of vampires, easiest to control but dangerous because they follow animal instinct when it comes to feeding. They cannot create other vampires, only kill.

There is only one way to kill a Mother which has some interesting results, but if I told ya'll that, you'd figure out the storyline. We can't have that, can we? It will be revealed in the story however. :))

Would you please continue this story?

oh this is wonderfull. i am an avid fan of your stories, and have read them all. this one is so ecsighting. i love it. i love the way you develobed the seen. the glimpsce of the animalistic quality his hunger gave him. my hart stated racing. i forgot to breete at one point. if this is a one shot so be it, but i hope not. so far mytop 3 favorite fics of yours are A Matter of Circumstance, The Ring, and By the Boulders in the Moonlight.....and more. i think this wold be on my fave list.

Clapping hands delightedly. Thanks for sharing, again. Pitt

Well come on! This aint no one-shot... we know you too well.

clever way of bringing back snape...i was pissed that rowling killed him in the book but i hope you do a great job in this one as him being a vampire :P

-sigh- Not at all a fan of Snape being a vampire. It's improbable. And unlikely. And just makes me sort of squiggle in my chair and say, "Eww." Sorry, you usually do decent work, and I recognized you as an author that I prefer to read from, but not into vampires. Perhaps there should be a bit of a warning in your summary so that us non-vamp Snape lovers can avoid this. It's well written, regardless of subject content, you've always been a decent writer, however I personally cannot do the Snape's a vamp thing. And I didn't find myself particularly moved with the comment about scaring the shit out of the other Death Eater. I could see that line coming a mile down the track, and was hoping for something not so cliche, though giving a character the guts enough to continue to take said shit in the presence of another, that's a gutsy move on your part, so well played, I suppose. I do hope to read more of your works, hopefully less vampire-involved ones. I do hope this stays as a one shot.

~CC

CryingCinderella: I'm so sorry about the cliche, but I couldn't freaking resist it. lol. Yeah, Snape as a full vamp is a stretch, and this will be the first time I've written him completely turned. I had him come close in "Love Bites" but of course he was saved from it by Hermione. The opportunity for humor is crazy though, and if I write this . . . there will be quite a bit of it since I'll probably lean towards something light and fun, though with adventure. I don't think I could write a really serious Snape as a Vampire story. Those purported powers of Vampire Seduction are tempting to explore though, heh heh. Thank you for your honest review. I'll be sure to put in something about vampires in the summary as you suggested.