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Yay!
Thanks for finishing. I appreciate it. Well done.

VIDEO PIMPAGE: Occasionally I make something relatively original available by a donation of choice (Some people send 10 cents. Slicksters. lol. :::shakes head:::) Anyway, I'd like to invite you to take a look at a free low-quality preview of a "Closer" video I made featuring Severus Snape.



This is quite a graphic video, definitely XXX NC-17 but Hermione isn't "technically" in it, because I have reservations about using Emma Watson clips in such a blatantly sexual video because let's face it, she's so young and it can get rather creepy. But there are women in it. Imagination can work wonders. lol. Besides, the focus is on the MAN.



Anyway, here's the link. I hope you like the preview. This thing took forever to make. whew.



DIRECT LINK TO PREVIEW: http://theburningpen.com/clteaser.wvx



DIRECT LINK TO PAGE: http://www.theburningpen.com/closer.htm



As I said, the quality of the preview is low so those with dial-up can view it as well. The uncut version is nice and clear. I have a realmedia version for dial-up viewing as well and the complete video is downloadable. Thanks a lot.

Great story, fantastic!!

I think this chapter was great. I wonder if the binding will take? ;) Both seem extremely blind to the obvious. Will they be surprised? Or will they have to try several times to get it right?

your work is great.
i loved this chapter.

that chapter was very, very lovely, ruth :)
I know you had to fight with this one, but let me tell you that I truly enjoyed it.
especially the last part was so utterly moving and touching, I so felt for the both of them.
I hope hermione can be more than his lily, she should be his hermione and nothing else :)
but the comparison was well put and so heart-breaking yet sweet.

maybe you're not feeling like this was a good chapter, but to me it surely was :)

I really liked this chapter. It was very moving. I think Severus is definitely in love with Hermione, he just doesn't recognize the emotion for what it is as he's never felt it before. Can't wait for more, I really love this story!

You're in the groove now, as far as I'm concerned. Snape is ready to love his witch. Let the lemons continue!

Wow long awaita nd it was worth it. dam That was sweet, when is this gonna end?????? are you having a writers Block???? Its alright I'm sure with some vanilla ice cream inspiration will come, You should listen To "Your my inspiration" Always Helped me when I'm stuck ^^

Brilliant! I love your writing and I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!