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for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank the heavens! You didn't kill him! *sighs in relief* More please!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, you had me shocked with ch20, but it just couldn't be that you kill him off!
we had that already and once is definitely one time too much *shudders*
but oh what a wonderful change of things in ch21. I'm glad he got rewarded for
his decision :) now I'm curious what life will bring the two of them and how
ron and harry will get back to their normal lives o_o
person pittwitch
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had me going for a minute or 60. I really thought you might have developed some sort of Snape-like mean streak after all this time. ;)

Thanks for sharing. Pitt

PS: RUH ROH - who gets to shove Harry and Ron out into the light of day. Mwahahahahah.
person Aragon
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to mention an error you made in chapter 19 re the number of Weasleys before reading on. There are 7 Weasley-children: 6 male, 1 female - so if you have Ron talking about his siblings he'd have 5 brothers and a sister. And with Fred dead post-DH he now has 4 (!) brothers and a sister.
person Aragon
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mhhh, I wondered how you'd keep Severus alive - or rather re-animate him again ^_^ - after Vashti's death didn't seem to be the solution and simply made them weaker vampires... And I LOVED that he stayed true to his convictions and was ready to end it on his terms! The way you wrote it I'd even have accepted his death as sad but fitting. But this twist is of course less tragic and more fulfilling, Hermione especially will prefer this outcome ^_^ Nice work!
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aragon: Thanks hon. I missed that completely. I write too fast and suck at math. lol ***
person KraeHi
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bounces in her seat merrily* yay sev lives! So cute!
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters are excellent.
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so worried there for a minute! Don't kill Snape!!!!

Yay. :) I love your stories and this one is turning into a favorite!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *dances* Thank you. I feel much better now. What happens next?!