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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 25 - 28 were simply brilliant.
I loved every tiny bit you wrote. from the DADA lessons to how hermione pwnd
severus at the lake, got detention and told him what was really necessary to be said about
him and their situation. she had every right to tell him what an idiot he was.
I understand why he dumped her, but it wasn't nice nevertheless. he didn't really give
her a chance to adapt to anything. however, I think you portrayed both characters' feelings
very well. every decision they made, everything they did, thought and how they acted especially
since the last 4 chapters is very well thought through.
not that they aren't throught through usually ;) am just saying that I really enjoy
the latest chapters with more gusto than usually. I'm also pleased to see how you work this
story out further and further. I thought, after vashti's death you'd wrap the story up and
end it, but you do more than that (adding the snape/lily bit, cool!). very nice :)
now I'm really curious how the man is going to apologize.
I don't think hermione will be an easy one *snickers*
I loved every tiny bit you wrote. from the DADA lessons to how hermione pwnd
severus at the lake, got detention and told him what was really necessary to be said about
him and their situation. she had every right to tell him what an idiot he was.
I understand why he dumped her, but it wasn't nice nevertheless. he didn't really give
her a chance to adapt to anything. however, I think you portrayed both characters' feelings
very well. every decision they made, everything they did, thought and how they acted especially
since the last 4 chapters is very well thought through.
not that they aren't throught through usually ;) am just saying that I really enjoy
the latest chapters with more gusto than usually. I'm also pleased to see how you work this
story out further and further. I thought, after vashti's death you'd wrap the story up and
end it, but you do more than that (adding the snape/lily bit, cool!). very nice :)
now I'm really curious how the man is going to apologize.
I don't think hermione will be an easy one *snickers*
schedule
November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape is really going to need some good luck. Doesn't keep any of that Felix Felicis around does he?
schedule
November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
F*&@ the boxers ... I was hoping for commando ;)
schedule
November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, excellent! :D
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitly an excellent chapter yet again! Loved it! :D Yum.
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please let hermione Give Him a run for is money lol... I love him (really) but nothing is more comforting (for me.. i'm not going to say to womans... because I'm only one) than seen someone who thinks has the world in is hand realize he doesn't, or in this case seen Snape Think he'll always have the upper hand and realize... he can be kick in the but. At least for this story (wich I haven't tell you is really good and entertaining, but it is :P) I'm with Hermione... GO GIRL XD...
Ok now my valium XD XD XD
Ok now my valium XD XD XD
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!!! Go Mione! Please update soon!
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA that was just awesome, good girl! LOL
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funny chapter^^
I have the impression that Severus was nicer when he was vampire. I really don't like him now, I prefer him vampire.
I have the impression that Severus was nicer when he was vampire. I really don't like him now, I prefer him vampire.