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should hermione forgive him?

hm.

yes. why? because everyone makes mistakes and although he apologized lately, he apologized thoroughly.
I mean, hermione must know how much he opened up to her just now, talking about lily etc.
it must have been quite hard for him to be left there in the passage, not knowing whether she accepted
his apology now or not. I think he looks quite vulnerable now. not that hermione would talk to anyone
about what he had said, but still... if I was him, I'd feel very uncomfortable now.
and hermione turning into some kind of lily (in the way she treats him) would be quite horrible. :(

As someone said before me (so sorry I don't remember your name)It would be sad id Lily's sotory repeat again for snape... he deserves something better... a real chance... He was a bastard true.. he still is in more ways than one... but he could be kind to her.. and that's is all she needs.. (and love I'm afraid) Anyway... I think i've never seen competition for snape with someone who can stimulates Hermiones mind, and that's always is bonus, that he is so smart. I want to see how he fights :P

I'm so glad you decided to work in the competition! Felt kind of bad for Snape, but I love that he's going to have to use the old Slytherin magic to get Hermione back. =D
Oodles of fun. Maybe some danger and life threatening moments would be very effective in bringing them back together.
But I'm just hoping, of course. You'll probably come up with some amazing method how to do that in a way that no one even dreamed of.
Thanks for writing!

history repeating itself?
oh no, that was exactly what I hoped would not happen. not that I believe you'll end the story with hermione and edgar being
a couple like lily and james were, but it's still something that hurts severus right now because he gets reminded of it, right?
cutting his food like he did and still waiting for her to forgive him aren't really good signs, aye ;)

a little competition would heat things up again for sure, but I really hope that severus doesn't get too hurt (again).
I think he suffered enough in all these years, so yeah... curious how you'll approach this further :)

Poor, poor Severus. Now he thinks the nightmare begins anew. I think that he will use his innate Slytherin tactics to win her back...He must prove to her, that he is capable of more than only to be harsh, cruel, rancorous etc. and that he has feelings for her. But this will be fun. The poor Ravenclaw boy...he has no idea, but I guess he will find out soon.
A little competition is always good but I do not hope that Hermione thinks that she can do almost everything with him, only to show him that he has done a mistake...that can backfire and I do hope, that history isn't repeating itself. My sweetheart Severus has suffered enough. Update soon. PLEASE!!!!!!

I like it. Please update soon.

Go Hermione! She is great^^ Finally she puts him in his place.

Oh, Bravo Hermione. Bravo.

ahh~~ good for hermione to tell off snape..too bad that he thought it would be easy to sleep with her again ^^

Wonderfull wonderfull, this story is only getting better. Seeing Snape Apollogize is something I've been waiting for ... well I'm not going to say long time.. but since a few chapters ago. I'm really enjoying this story.