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omg...noooooooooooo...i am here in tears...please fix this...pleaase

Hmmm...wasn't Lily a bit bitchy there...she always came across as shy and meek and doe-like in the book. Thats why I always liked Hermione more because shes so feisty. THat Lily was just a tad OOC. And Sev followed her around like a puppy O_o...this story makes it sound as if Lily actually only ever used Sev for her own means...

and wouldn't she have had better values growing up?- I mean I can see Sev wanting to experiment with sex...I mean with his crappy childhood...looking for some sort of physical contact but I can't really see Lily wanting to actually do that.Curious yes,of course, but I should think that her parents would have also been the type to emphasise the value of a girls virginity. From what I can remember she had pretty nice parents who were pretty pleased about her being a witch...so proud of her. I'm thinking she would have tried not to dissapoint her parents.Just a thought though...BTW:A quick thought... What happened to Harrys grandparents? Why are they never mentioned in the books??

Ryu: I never saw Lily as meek and doe-like. Not in the memory by the lake or in DH when they talked. And she did marry the man who tormented Snape all of his years at Hogwarts. What suddenly made a man who was a toe-rag loveable? Did she do it just to hurt Snape further? Why couldn't she see that Snape was wildly upset down by the lake when he called her Mudblood? Did she have any Empathy? Any care that he was outnumbered and reacting to being targeted by Gryffindors, which was Lily's house? Not only was he stripped in front of a bunch of students by James,who somehow stole his own original spell, but then his best friend tells him she can't take him anymore and cuts him off? And still he becomes a spy for Albus hoping to protect her and when she dies he protects her son at the risk of his own life for years, a son that hates him by the way. The saddest part is Lily probably never gave him another thought after she married James. Yes, I could see Snape following her about like a puppy at Hogwarts, he was obsessed with her and that obsession made his life hell. He got killed for her in the end, too. No, no perfect Lily this story. Not this time. Wow. I don't think I've ever gotten this mad at one of JKR's characters before. lol. Good thing I can write it out. ;)

How many young women brought up with values end up pregnant by 16 or less than sixteen. Ever hear how wild preachers' daughters can be? I know from experience, what a child will do around their parents is far different than what they'll do away from them. Unprotected sex, taking drugs and all manner of things happen just because a child is curious. It is still the old adage, you can lead a horse to water, but you can't count on your children actually listening to you. Experimentation is normal. But what will be experimented with is up to the individual. Another thing about children is just because they were raised to be good, and act like they're good, it really doesn't mean they're good. They could just be sneaky. lol. As to Harry's grandparents, I've always assumed they were dead.

I dont much like Vampire stories but since I think you are a fabulous writer, I gave it a shot. Entertaining, but especially the aftermath. I am enjoying the contrasts with Hermione and Lily. I think that given Snape's history he probably wont forgive her for a while if at all. But then where's the story go? hehe. Guess we will leave that up to your brillant mind to deduce. Other then that, I love the charachterizations and humor. Great Work Ruth!

Dear Ms_Figg,

It is the first time I am leaving you a review, but I just have to tell you that I absolutely adore ALL of your stories....read all of them!!!
I really hope that Severus and Hermoine will sort out everything! I literally gasped when Sevie gave his moving speech about Hermione and Lily.......truth be told, I really hate Lily now!

pls,pls, pleaaaaaaase!!!! Tell me, is everything going to be ok? I really do not want Severus stray to other women...*sob*

cheers,

witch

I really think I'm going to have to write a "redeem Lily Evans" story after this to get her back in people's good graces.

It's refreshing to finally see a canon Lily who doesn't give a flying fuck about Sev's feelings. Because she didn't. From the get go she just accepted him grudgingly, she never loved him, I agree with you about that, if she had loved him she would have fought to keep him from joining LV, she would have forgiven the "mudblood" incident (in fact, friends forgive name calling, otherwise nobody would stay friends for very long. Hermione told Ron he was stupid, and he didn't make such a big deal of it did he? She even forgave him for abandonning Harry and her in their time of need. Lily was a lousy friend and got what was coming to her with Pettigrew's betrayal, that's karma baby!)

I love this story, do I smell a new Odessa coming around the bend? Update soon please!

WHO cares about lily evans??? XD... you don't have to make her looks nicer... if she was a spoiled brat just like James... fine with me XD. I think that Snape dating other womens its one of the funniest ways (potencially for us) for him to discover how wonderfull would be returning to hermione... Imagine him bored to tears with some of the womans he could date... XD XD XD... or imagine him trying to make a smart conversation, and finding that is counterpart simply can't follow him. In some moment his brain must process the idea that a son or a daughter is 50% father and 50% mother XD (actually is more mother u_u)wich will eventually make him realize that his ideal son or daugther should have a mother with a good brain, just like him.