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by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lily was a manipulative bitch
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol CB13. I really think I have about 30 or 40 readers who are constantly refreshing for updates. lololol. Glad you are enjoying the story. ****
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31: I'm not bothered by underage sex under those circumstances. They were both teenagers who experimented. Lily's attitude, though, bothered me. I'm not sure a 14 year old girl would have such a detached attitude about sex, yet I admit not to know every teenage girl in the world, and I might be surprised.
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
septentrion: You know, some writers write from what they know, but I can't say I know this for sure, but I can tell you about one situation that I remember way back when. This was a long time ago. I think the early '70's. Disco Lady was the hot song of the moment and I don't think I was more than 13 or 14. I lived in a mixed neighborhood and there was this girl named Louise, an Italian girl, beautiful with wild black hair, a big nose and a big butt who used to dance to that song and all the boys were just plain in love with her. I remember myself, Louise and two other girls being alone with this boy named Patrick, and Louise made him show us his "wand." I was so uncomfortable, I left. You could tell he didn't want to do it, but because Louise asked him, he did. Later I heard Louise made Patrick "hump" her and the other girls. That's what we called it then. I don't know if penetration was involved because I didn't ask, but he had to have his pants down at least. So yeah, girls can be like that. I still remember the last names of everyone too, but won't use them. We're all grown up now. But some things stick with you.
person MND
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes you Build up a lot of Snape sympathy with this last chapters XD XD XD (Just don't push it JAJAJA) Dumb is one of the few words I have for lily now in my mind... the good thing is, that Hermione, being the way she is, will sweep away her memory in merely seconds XD. If Snape can't see how much better is Hermione for him, How she wouldn't play with him, then he's dumb too XD. Moving along nicely

person Shamanda
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I just love how you've figgified the whole snape/vampire situation, although that seems to all be water under the bridge now. The story
person phistolemon
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*facepalm* damn, hermione.
this is exactly what I thought would happen.
well, imo he had every right to react the way he did now,
though his view on his future is really sad.
everyone just uses him, eh? sigh. looks like it.. but I hope hermione -somehow- manages
to get back to him and prove him that he's more worth than that :\
person McHell
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I want him to give in. Of course he will. But at the same time, Hermione was pretty immature to act the way she did. She's young and probably felt some vindication. *sigh* Can't wait to see what happens next!
person MND
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This could be interesting.. as long as you don't make them be stupid for too long... XD

schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor sev .. what is it going to take mione to do to get him back ... please please more .. later for now

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