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Ch 26 - "Snape called to them, billowing up like an approaching storm." What a wonderful visual!

up to chap 31 so far. geez look what happens when u don't check in regularly. sev/lily/james parallels with herm/wolfe/sev. but frm where sev stands he's still the pitiable one but its not like that really. wolfe is more like snape was then and in the position to get hurt. poor boy, but mione will handle the situation much better than lily did surely. we're so cruel as children, but it's frm petulance and ignorance not malice. though u still have me hating lily just a bit. gods that experience was so damaging! all though u laid it on a tad thick, it's relatable. i am liking this new empowered mione. i hope she dussnt jerk him about, i doubt she would, its not her way at all. though she may let him sweat it out for a while. god snape would hate this vulnerable character i see him as now. no worries, he'll do some snarky something-or-other sooner or later that'll have me thinking differently. update soon. imma catch up now, just had to put my too-sense in. >;^

ok....U REALLY NEED TO UPDATE! wonderful speech, sev's death was great frm a literary sense, so tragically unfair u can practically feel the blade twist. BUT DAMN THAT KINDA SHIT SHOULD NEVER HAPPEN! it's moments like that that u think ,if there is a god, he dussnt like you. grateful to fanfics and the authors rightin' the wrongs. NOW UPDATE WOMAN! NO MORE CLIFFS OR HILLS! im about t' pee my pants frm anxiousness and excitement! ^.^v

I like it. Please update soon.

more excellent updates! I absolutely love this story. :D

dam girl you got me crying again...you turn me into a leaky faucet when i read your work...i loved this part....i loved her apology to snape...now would be a nice time to bring in sexy sneaky snape for payback jiggy...i mean figgy style...lol...keep up the good work hun...

Aigh, thank heavens. Bitter, wronged Severus bothering me all afternoon. Loving this story, and so glad you let it become more than a one-shot.

Cheers, and thank you, you genius, for sharing your talent with your thousands of fans,

CB

I'm glad this is not over now that Snape is back to human- it seems to just be getting started! I think Hermione should forgive Snape- but not right away. He did apologize after all. She better not start playing games with that Edgar boy, he's nice enough but if she tries to do that it won't help her with Snape. For now it just looks like she's trying to figure things out, which is good. And poor Severus- what a horrible thing for Lily to do to him! Ouch- I mean, she obviously knows he has feelings for her, or at least she knows she can manipulate him easily, and she uses him just as an "experiment", then she expects him to keep everything secret- what a selfish little brat. I know some of it can be chalked up to being immature, young and stupid, but still- she obviously did not deserve Severus's devotion. Hopefully he and Hermione can make things right and Snape can break this sad cycle of his.

UGH. I hate Edgar and stealers. What an asshole.

thank goodness for competition!!!