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for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person katiekrm
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so hilarious. Fairy vampmother? A pouting Victor when Adam has a headache? That was sssooo funny. Well, at least Aden survived Victor and is reaping the rewards. Sheesh. Ron is so awful. The way he spoke to Hermione and thinks she should have given in to him for his efforts. And he left those girls to meet the vamps' wrath on their own. And he didn't use contraceptive spells. What a dick! What on earth is he going to come up with in his book?
person katiekrm
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another very funny chapter. I love Hermione's overabundance of adjectives to describe said vampire. Snape better start being nice to her if wants to get some. But he won't be, will he? I hate those stupid recaptcha words! I can't make out what they say 25% of the time!
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
katiekrm: I hate the captcha thingy too. Most of the time I have to put on my glasses, peer close and STILL get the doggone thing wrong. But at least this one isn't as bad as others I've seen. And using an audio option is worse, because there's crackling and other noises too. lol. Anyway, captcha aside, glad you're enjoying the story and took out the time to comment despite those blasted scrambled letters.
person katiekrm
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I was afraid that Snape was going to be awful to Hermione, but I am glad he seems to finally be seeing the error of his ways. I LOVED the broom chapter! Way to go Hermione!
person katiekrm
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In his case uncut had two meanings? That is so hilarious!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person smmz79
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i just have to sya that i have read a lot of your stories and i have loved them all but i think this is my favorite... snape is hysterical he is perfect his witty come backs his sultry way with hermione the humor he gets when he screws around wiht ron and harry i love it all and the part that had me laughing was when he allowed her her secrets... but would 'compel' harry to tell him very slytherin
person smmz79
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
adam and victor are familiar... they are my fave vampires i love how you write them esp adam his is great i love gay vampires... and they were from love bites right
person smmz79
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love your snape/hermione stories the way you write him is awesome i love your snape and no one writes snape smut scenes like you...i love how u started this when he was killed by nagini... great job
person Queeny
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah for happy endings!