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for With Teeth

by Dadella

person freelancer360
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I missed two chapters? I suppose this is what I get for letting life get in the way of me checking this site often. Damn it! Anyways they were great! Really heavy...I don't know if it's the late hour and my own little fondness for angst but I feel so freakin sad. Poor Harry...just had to fall for him didn't he? And Draco is getting a little 'to' involved eh? I like that ;)

The end of the last chapter really got to me...I just wanted Draco to throw him down and make mad sweet passionate love to him...but of course that wouldn't really fit with the story eh? Oh well. Let's hope those scars fade fast!!!! Thanks so much for the updates, can't wait for more!!!!!! (That's right just forget about everything else and just write and write and write! Hey a girl can wish can't she?)

Anyways I suppose I should try and finish the next chapter to my story...it's about halfway done and I'm stuck...grrr. So frustrating.

*eagerly awaiting the next installment*

schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9! Harry is his favorite? Or one of his favorites? Oh poor Harry! I'm not sure he'll make it!
person NightLo
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An update!!! Oh...you make me so happy~~~

But...poor Harry, it seems that it is not his good day...would Harry leave all these and just walk away...so that he will feel better?
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story breaks my heart. i can't wait for more.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's to sad. I don't like Harry like this. Sorry.
person special_delivery
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is very good so far (it's hard to find this type of story written this well) i sincerely hope you continue it, and i'm bookmarking it to come back to later (since i don't have an account)
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's a deal. before the end of the month it is. much author love
person myniephoenix
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to read the next chapter. i am enjoying this story greatly!
person Jan
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Chapter. Loved every bit of it. Very Yummy.

As for Neville having a charm like Harry, Wow, that's all I could say.

Is Harry going to start getting jealous over this? Or is he going to accept it as another peer, that enjoys the same things as him?

Please update chapter 7 soon. ^_^
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonder if he'll talk to Neville about it? Soo need chapter 7!