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I really, honestly expected you to let Harry fall to his death. Maybe that's me screening my intentions onto yours, but that's what I was thinking the whole time. Actually, I was more thinking: "Shit, Kita killed Harry!"

Anywho, I enjoyed the ending, how you mixed what happened on the tower and what happened afterward together. It was a good read and I have to say I also enjoyed the little snippets of music and the whole use of the album throughout the story.

I must say I'm looking forward to your newest project (Na na na na na na na~)

Miss you!

-Shadoe Dae (Keru)

That was sad and painful and beautiful and................well I'll just say that I really liked it. I'll have to keep my eye out for more of your writing.

There's not more... But... But... I'm not okay with that... I want more... That was not a fair ending...

Please update? Yes? Yes. Good.

Until then.

Hey, is there any way you could email me when you update, I'd really appreciate it, your story is amazing.

Soooooo need chapter 7!!! I loved this story the first time and I'm still spellbound!

This is really good and I'm enjoying it very much. I do have one thing to point out, however. Even though this is what Harry wants, it's still new to him which is why a safe word is in place. However, you had Harry bound and gagged to the point where he would not have been able to utter his safe word even if he had wanted too. In a situation where the slave/sub is both tied and gagged, usually they're given something to hold onto that when dropped will signal that he/she wants to stop. It's not that big a deal, but if you're going to write about BDSM I thought I would point that out. Love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey!! Thanks soo much for searching for that story I have it saved on my documents now :) but I was actually referring to the story by Maya called Your Every Wish. The author had mentioned that she was going to take down all of her fiction and so I saved it on my comp but unfortunately my hard drive crashed and I lost it. I was hoping someone else might have saved some of her fiction as well cause it's no longer on the net. Anywho thanks so much!! I really do appreciate you trying to help me out :) Feel free to delete this 'review' lol, but I left my email just in case you wanted to contact me again.

Btw I am patiently awaiting the updates to this story and the others so take your time :)

I haven't read this one yet and I have to say I am very intrigued... especially as to why Draco is soo popular...
And poor emo Harry :( I don't like Harry to be unhappy, so I'm looking forward to the fluffy ending lol. Please update soon my dear :)