schedule
February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really appreciate the originality of this story, definitely above the head girl and head boy trivial smut that I'm used to. I can't wait for it to continue, and please do! I hate nothing more than an unfinished story, even more than a bad one.
schedule
February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting you up date.(^_^)
schedule
December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love your plot very much, it's great. the chemical between them was amazing. i think Ia stuck with your story (^_^). good job and update soon!.
schedule
December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please, it has been a month and i cannot take it any longer. PLEASE START UPDATING OR I AM GOING CRAZY!!!
you write so beautifull!! I know you must have a life but i dont so please update soon!!
you write so beautifull!! I know you must have a life but i dont so please update soon!!
schedule
November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First time being logged in AFF and this, is my first review ! ^_^
I just want to tell you that I really love that fiction ! I like it when they are aboard! especially in Japan. and the sexual tension between our two fav characters is ...superb ! But I hope they will jump to each other very soon ! LOL ! It's kind of cruel the way Draco ended that chapter (poor Hermione!)...I hope he will be good to her very soon ! ;-p. Very nice plot, I like your work, all of them. please, update very soon and frequently ! you got me completly hooked ! :)
I just want to tell you that I really love that fiction ! I like it when they are aboard! especially in Japan. and the sexual tension between our two fav characters is ...superb ! But I hope they will jump to each other very soon ! LOL ! It's kind of cruel the way Draco ended that chapter (poor Hermione!)...I hope he will be good to her very soon ! ;-p. Very nice plot, I like your work, all of them. please, update very soon and frequently ! you got me completly hooked ! :)
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY, PLEASE KEEP WRITTING, I LOVE IT SO MUCH MADE MYSELF AN ACCOUNT TO REVIEW U.HAHAHAHAHA. IT WAS AWESOME THAT ARI TURN OUT TO BE IN TO VAGINA, HOW HERMIONE PUT IT, AND THAT THEY WENT TO A MOTEL, REALLY FUNNY.
schedule
November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo that was mean of him (or nice, I can't tell yet, spin out another chapter so I can get a feeling for the motivation here-lol), maybe he couldn't do it for work related reasons or better yet it could never be just once...still ouch.
schedule
November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice rooms and chap!
schedule
November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've probably said this before but your writing skills are amazing, I hope Draco and Hermione can get it on soon ;) That was really good how you got Draco to say he couldn't do this as the obvious choice to say it would of been Hermione. Please update soon as you can!!!!!
schedule
November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh! What a cliffhanger! I'm loving the tension between these two and laughed hard at Ari's preference to Hermoine & then Draco's reaction to the news. Keep up the good work.