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This I am not sure I love, but I like it :D

Way cute lol. It was different from the normal stuff that you write but it worked. Mixing things up every once ina while isnt a bad thing lol.

Nice. Interesting how you change up their jobs a bit. It is too bad we can't see more into Draco's thoughts, of why he would cheat on Harry. That interested me a bit. Great job.

*snicker* I doubt that's what the prompt ment, but I'm not complaining. That was funny and a little sad all in one bundle. Yay for Harry sticking up for his man. Harry would have made such a great Slytherin: lying, fucking in the office, manipulation.

Funny . . . in an odd sense. Draco's really cute and I like how Harry came to his conclusion that Draco needed him at the end.

I stated earlier today on another story that the long reviews I left didn't seem to be appreciated. I've read three stories and left short reviews: Great Job, Good Work, Well done. But compared to yours they really didn't deserve them, however, yours needs one.

Your story was well thought out and executed prefectly. I felt Harry's angry and confusion it made me wonder why I was still with Draco. Of corse we know I'm not, lol. Then I started questioning myself, much like Harry. Do I want to leave him? Will we really be better off without each other? I was able to feel what Harry felt. The questions: How did you know I wouldn't hurt you? How did you know I wouldn't reject you? Both with the same brilliant answer, I just know. Strangely enough I knew that Harry would take the blame, I mean he had to have something up his sleeve. I laughed out loud when Draco made his declaration that started it all. I mean he was bold and daring, everything a Malfoy should be. I was sitting here slack jawed.

Talk about crooked cop! Imagine being and international agent and while you work in different countries you rob the blind. Heh, no problem they didn't need it anyway! Lol. I loved the way it was written and while there were minor errors it didn't take away from the overall enjoyment meaning that you had your reader in mind when you wrote this. You did a great job. To make a a long review short: Thanks for sharing this.

Nicole
MisstressNicole

Well...this is really quite...different, though tension is a byproduct of how Draco and Harry interact - however, with so much tension around, someday they will break up...lucky that it does not happen in this one...thanks for this.

Oh those two! I was afraid that Harry was going to end things!

so sweet of harry!