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for Demonic Release

by CryingCinderella

person quoryer
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was possiabaly (SP) the most amazing thing i have ever read. Finally someone has the back bone to wright about my fave deatheater in a way she deserves to be written in. I just have to than you and that saying you did a good job is an under statment. I can't wait to read some more of your work.
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did an extraordinary job! The voices from both of the ladies sounded like they fit perfectly. I hope you continue, it's really well written! :)
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update?
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update?
person Cina
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am flushed and out of breath that was so intense. Don't worry about writing disturbing stories and what it says about you as a writer. I think that as long as you offer a warning and post it age-appropriately, it's okay. We all have darkness and need to spill it from time to time. Anyhow, I loved your characterization of Bellatrix SO much. She scared the hell out of me, the psycho! Great job love!
person Shay
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Few people really get Bellatrix's character down very well, and I think you did a pretty good job. The taunting, and the "don't call me Nymphadora" stuff really makes this more than just some author's S&M story with interchangeable characters using Harry Potter names.

I will cry if you don't update.
person crab crusher
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i knew bellatrix was into BDSM good chapter coninue please.
person saixs
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it, please continue.