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for Babies are for Keeps

by BlackGargie

person Aihythil
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, but when I came to the part when Remus babie squeezed herself out at the same time as her brother... I found it to be to much...
It became ridiculous... :S
Thus it will result in me giving you only four stars... Otherwise I would have given you five.
But other then that I think this story was good!
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable, even with the angst :) ::MV::
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! love the story wish there was more to it
person Tobasco
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do yourself a favor and get a beta reader--don't be lazy. At least read over what you write and correct the typos.
person Hine
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should be online on Sunday <3 Also, lol, you made Snape a little whore XDDD
person Leentjef
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD BEGINNING KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BY BYE
person xhedwigx
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Is there going to b any-more chapters?
Because it would b really interesting 2 see how Remus reacts when he finds out
he helped produce a little girl.