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for An Unwanted Child

by Venelite

schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great oneshot...could you possible another chapter with Lucia tracking down her parents later down the track??

schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, so sad - tears in my eyes. Still, at least Narcissa found a safe place for her. Would Lucius have had her drowned like an unwanted kitten, I wonder?

Are they able to tell a newborn is a Squib though? I'm not sure whether canon says or not, but I always thought the magic didn't express itself till they were a bit older.

Never thought I'd feel sorry for Narcissa, but I really do in this. Thanks for re-posting!
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so absolutely heart wrenching. Beautiful no doubt, but heartbreaking.
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor thing!
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Different...but sad...poor Narcissa