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for Silver Eyes

by AbaresDaArk

schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 6!!!
person Word_Slave
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sure I can beta for you.. do you have my email... or I'm NarutoKakashi@live.com and on chat
person Ecks
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next!
person calanthe
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhm, you should totally update now XD It took me a while to catch up on this! But UPDAAAATE! I know you're not at work XP
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahha i cant wait for more!
person NightLo
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't first Draco go and take back his wand, and preferably buy a new one, just in case that revenge is on the way?

schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5! Sarah still might be a problem later on.
person Mehla
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You could really use a beta, or to slow down and re-read before you post. Your story was a tad confusing, or just off when you used the wrong words. You also said something about Draco's wife not seeing his parts before >_> a little odd since they have a kid. But it's not a terrible story, just could use some polishing.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
draco goes free after she and he sign the papers and he sees harry and runs to him! idk
person NightLo
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually what decisions have Draco made? I mean...personality change?? Or belief changes??? Something like that?