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by MisstressNicole

schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They never found anything to help? Not even magic? Does Draco ever wake up? Poor Harry!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! I sooo need chapter 6!!!!
person graballz
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! *whimper* NOOOOOOO!!!!! MY BABY!!!! Harry WILL think of something!!! Someone else will match!!! It'll work!! It has to!!! Please, Nikki, please, don't let your muses kill Draco!!! *BAD PLOT BUNNY*

Hermione was a tissue match for Draco, so she gave him her liver??? Or a portion of HER liver and it'll regenerate? (I think I had biology somewhere, like, 10 years ago...now the only kind of anatomy that I remember is Harry's and Draco's! *giggle*)

Wow, this was a really emotional chapter!! Very nice! I love the realistic portrayal of the struggle to keep on hoping in the face of reality! It makes me so sad to hear Draco talking all morbid, but it's the reality of the situation. But *has faith while clinging to your knees* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET DRACO DIE!!!!!!!!
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gee! Your gonna let Draco die? Well that sucks.
person ZooArmy
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sob* oh god oh god oh god this gets sadder with every new chapter. I'm really sitting in front of my computer now and cry like a little baby. damn it!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I made it! Whew...told you I'd get here one day.

Ok...so I checked out your spot...and it's not bad. Are you going to finish this story?

I think you did a great job with describing Draco's addiction and his denial. The story moved a bit fast, I wanted to understand and learn about your characters more, but it wasn't a bad story at all.

Keep up the writing!
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so surprised when I saw that this had four chapters. I'd forgotten I'd written the fourth chapter. Sad I know. I'm hoping to have the next chapter written in a few days.
person NightLo
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...really what a way to learn about muggle ways...Draco should be proud to have lover like Harry and friend like Hermione!!!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!! Will Draco accept her help?
person ZooArmy
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW Oh my god, I love you. In the middle of the chapter I thought it would end up all bad and sad, but you made her a match. THANK YOU! I think if I'd be Harry I wouldn't have so much strength to endure with all the problems and stress and pain. I'd get depressive, I think. Like, changing positions with Draco, you know, he heals and Harry gets down. Or something like that.
Great chapter!!!