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for Wind Rider

by SuishouTenshi

schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so need more. Keep up the great work and update as soon as possible.

Kat
person Shanice
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE! this is so awesome! i like your writing even if you only worte it when you were 16
person d-white bentley
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!! you are soooo rude! how could you do that, right when they finally kissed too. and yes a cliffy is good sometimes but right in the middle of a firt kiss is not one of them. besides that the story is good, ya got the complication of the draco/harry relationship down to a sience (note-the last statement isn't really true just an exagerations(sp) cause i like the story) i can't wait to see the other's(ron, hermione, ect.) reaction. keep on a postin'...
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh so cute!
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 5! Both sets of wings came out. Which when Draco gets his mind straight he'll realize and prolly run again. *sigh*
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this! I'm pretty sure i read it the last time it was posted but it was so long ago i'm not 100%, and if i did i know i didnt get that far into it so i'm dying for the next part! Keep up the good work! =]
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh come on, that project and mid-term are such ticks of the eternal clock, when what is really important is the next chapter of this riveting story. *puppy-dog eyes* just kidding, good luck with school and get back as soon as you can. Love this!
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-debates on shooting you or not for stopping there-
So i like this one so far its neat i always like wind-riders it's great to read about close to Vela but not vela at the same time... too many stories about them out there i guess But i'm rambling. your right the first part does seem like a younger person wrote it but it's getting butter (hurra) I like it a lot so far i'm a little worried it's going to go south though it appears it may just lead right to smut stuff (which is fine i guess) but i think that maybe you should add some plot in here too make something happen thats apart from just Harry and Draco deciding hey I really want to do him lol

Hope you think on it,
~Ero
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still like the story a lot, i know you already have 12.5 chapters done, it might of just seemed like it was about to go to smut quickly because thats how a lot of people go about it -sighs- Sorry...
But heart this a lot, also Tonks as a teacher is great o-m-g funny


~Ero
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! I sooo need chapter 4!