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for Wind Rider

by SuishouTenshi

schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8! Who just yelled?
person d-white bentley
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hhmmmm, i liked it. there was actually less yelling when the elder malfoy's told about harry than i though, but hey you did a good job and your the one writing the story, who am i to complain about something as little as that.
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The only thing I am mad about is the fact that Draco is the dom. It works for this story though. Keep up the fucking fantastic work and update soon.

Kat
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He's going to chase him? Yippie! I sooo need chapter 7!
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you know how much you just made my night. I haven't even started re-reading, but I am so excited that you are working on it again!

Your story was absolutely amazing and inspiring (even if you were only 16).

I plan to keep up with you!

~cyn
person obsession
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE FASTER!!!!!!!!!! LOL. I AM DYING IN ANTICIPATION FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I WILL BE PATIENT THOUGH. THIS IS A GREAT STORY
person obsession
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! WHO CAUGHT THEM???? IS IS PANSY! I CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 8 UPDATE!!!!!
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You!
I'd use your full name, but I don't know it, so, I'll settle for You!

I hate reading stories that are not finished, now I remeber why.
For written at 16 and then corrected the story is really good, glad to see from the dates you are reposting every few days... There are still a few parts where things are a little off, but since I don't remember them, they can't have been that bad. So, have fun correcting, and hope to be comenting on the next chapter soon.

Llove Jane.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoy this story and appreciate the fact that you took the time to put in a plot before you just threw them into bed together. With such great character opportunities, that takes a lot of restraint. I applaude you. And a good plot you've made!! It has steady fact threads, it doesn't leave loose endings, and its intriguing. If there's a mailing list, I would like to be added. My email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.

Thank you,
Lunatic with a hero complex
person d-white bentley
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, i applaud you...