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by soldiersgirl0709

person mariteri
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did an excellent job! I hope to read more of your stories soon.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, Severus as the over-indulgent uncle and attentive stand-in for missing mate is quite funny. Very nice story.
person Kate
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It ended happily! le sigh. I really loved this story (and your style & ability to update quickly) ALOT. I look forward to more of your stuff in the future and esp. your Remus/Hermione!!!
Thanks for writing this awesome story!!!
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want my own team of sexy guys doing my bidding and giving foot rubs when I'm pregnant!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read this pairing, I'm glad I took the time to read this one! So, just a couple of more chapters? Do you have an update list? If so, please put me on there never_tempt@yaho.com I can't wait for the rest!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol Poor Remus! That was funny! Please add more soon
person wishyouwere
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, and all of the others that you have written! I am hoping that for the next one we may see another SS/HG - it is my favourite pairing, and you do such a good job with it. I think that I like your writing so much because of the happy endings (I get a little depressed by the 'angsty' fics), and because they are generally well written (I am a professional editor/proof reader so I tend to be pickier than most). Nothing is worse than someone who has found a unique or interesting story line, but ends up mangling it with bas spelling and grammar. I also enjoy knowing that when I log in to the site, I can count on one or two new chapters from you each day. Again, nothing is more annoying than an interesting story that ends up abandoned, or updated so irregularly that it loses its momentum. Keep up the great work!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! ROFL! I loved the banter! The spoon on thwacking the forehead that was classic! I can't wait to see if Ron got the right food or not.. If Mitchell wasn't fast enough my craving would change or if it got cold I'd get ill looking and smelling it!
person j
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg just when i thought i couldnt laugh any harder at your story you prove me wrong... i love that hermionie thinks snape is sweet and everyone is jumping for her orders so well. i would luv to see what happens tho if she didnt get the craving food once from remus but any way bravo!!!
person angelbaby
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny. I love how she has them all trained to jump at her command. The cutest Snape ever, being all sweet and giving her foot rubs ('cause she's special). Poor old Remus guess he'l learn quick enough.