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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Snape_goddess I know what it is like to be a daddy's girl I was one myself (still am if i am honest with myself daddy's are the best LOL). Loved the couple of chapters things are beginning to heat up looking forward to the next chapters keep up the good work
person pittwitch
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hermione may have never thought he had it in him, but, we all know (and hope) differently! Thanks for sharing. Pitt
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person kittycat30
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More soon please!!!
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to get a kiss. I am glad that Hermione got this far with Remus. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFL I just see him standing there saying "don't do that!"
person mariteri
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! That was great! Please keep going. I am waiting breathlessly for the next chapter.
person Ox King
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I kind of like this aggressive Hermione. Things are starting to heat up in this story. Great chapter by the way. I love Herm/R.L. love stories. Thanks a lot for keeping up with the story and not quiting.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person angelbaby
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She is a naughty witch, such a tease. I love that when I check each day for your updates that you have more then one chapter posted. You spoil us. God I love how you write, it's exactly how I imagine certian scenes to unfold. I love how you write men to act like little boys ("I am not grumpy."), there's something so endearing about grown men being petulant children. This works espeacially well with Severus and Lucius because they are usually so big and forceful, so when they act all cute and boyish I melt into a little puddle, you write this so well. One of my fav scenes in your fics is your HG/LM fic where they are sitting by the pool (the hotdog scene)and he makes her comb his hair, so sweet. Keep writing, your the best.