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by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person angelbaby
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm SS and LM male review........ great now there's drool on my key board.
I need to be honest and say that as much as I love your writing and will always read anything that you write I just can't get into Lupin. Severus is my first love and now closely followed by Jason sorry I mean Lucius. Maybe it's the bad boy thing that I fall for. I know Lupin is all wolfie but he's just to kind and good for me. There's something about a snarky and/or scary death eater that when they do something sweet or god-forbid actually smile, you just melt into a little puddle. I know you know what I mean. This is a good story though, I like a strong willed Hermione. Happy writing....
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. I hope that Remus doesn't break it off with Hermione. I hope that they remain together. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Maura
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow you are a exceptional writer! I don't believe that I've ever read a HG/RL fic so well put together. I can't wait to read the rest!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh stupid Sirius! Had to spoil everything! Great chapter by the way! Please add more.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely not enough smut for one day! I can't wait for more!
person firefairy2006
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this story please please continue with it.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!!! I have to know what happens!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'm confused. why would remus have to walk away? i thought that they were going to be together, not just for as long as they were there in ireland. did i miss something?