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about #14...

First of all, let me say I was right there with Harry having a "What the hell?!?!"
moment...'What that hell?..what tha' hell??..whu' dah' hell???' :-)

That Thomas is an over-confidant, cocky bastard. Definitely not a villian, BUT
most definitely an antagonist of the suave kind. There's potential to do much with
him in another future story.

NOW, about the group, I'm like this...IF everyone wants to move onto other, better
things. Then I say, either dissolve the group after this story OR condense it down
to 3 people per se and choose another name [leave the Coven name intact, in case
ALL of you decide to do something again in the future, especially with the
movie coming out soon].

I think it would be good to go ahead and part on good terms, that way in the future
if anyone ever decides they want to do another story with anyone else, there won't
be a problem.

You could still be each others Beta or temporary partner for a two-manned [two-womanned] story.

..just announce it & let folks know what you'll be doing. Anyway, that's my
$.25 on the dollar.


nuff said...

you asked for us to tell you what we think is going to happen and what we want, so here it goes, i think you're going to have him sleep with her and i think its disgusting and wrong, like you pointed out its in the harry/draco section under slash. so i think having him sleep with anyone else i dont want, but a girl? no thanks. I could go on but i'd probably get pretty rude and you dont need that. but other than this, great story:D oh and personally i dont think olivander would want draco whoring himself out for the ingredients

ok yea im with harry on this. that thomas guy is a prick. sorry. update soon

Your story is breaking new ground. It has the possibilities for many episodes. I think you get over-worried about exact details and do not allow for artistic licence. The fact that your story hangs together means - to me - that you are putting a lot of thought into it. Fiction takes us from reality into another world, that is its glory. We have already entered that other world in becoming Harry/Draco addicts. Each of us has a glimpse of this new world and you have led us into it beautifully. It belongs to you - although JKR started us all out on the journey - I am thoroughly enjoying your allowing us into your part of the world. Artistic licence allows us to alter perceptions. In one of my stories I had a paintball range - it in no way represented what really happens in real life, I used it as a tool to further the story. I love your German Castle, I have visited a few, and you have picked out its mysteriousnes atmosphere. I cannot wait for your next installment - Good Luck.

More to the last review:
If two lovers really love each other then who does what to whom really does not matter. Harry rightly felt that Draco needed a token of his trust so he bottomed. Personally I like either to bottom I feel it shows a willingness to share. I do get worried sometimes whem one partner seems to be dominant. A true partnership swaps roles - just as you story has shown - Both Draco and Harry have their insecuruities - great - you tell us about them and how they deal with each other to boost, challenge, understand and comfort each other. That is what makes your story so real. More Please.

Sooo need chapter 15! So will Draco do it? Will he prostitute himself for wand ingredients? This would break them.

Please please please please please please please do NOT let Draco impregnate the werewolf hussy! I'm begging!

Harry is so honest. i love that about him.....very outspoken. lol

I personally do not want Draco to do it. He worried he was a whore, well that would basically make him one...sex for blood and hair, not to mention a baby! Plus, I would hope the sister would be against it. I hope she rips her brother a new one. I can't believe Draco even considered it. Also, I think Olivander knew something of a sexual nature could be asked for. He shouldn't be let off the hook either. If he even thought it was possible, he may as well have pimped them out. Please take no offense to my review. I'm only doing as you asked, giving my thoughts on the chapter and what should happen. I know Remus asked him not to, but, I think Thomas should be made clear who he is dealing with. He needs an attitude adjustment and clearly needs taken down off his high horse. Maybe in the end he would respect them more for standing up to him. I was hoping whatever farfetched request he made would only be a test to see how they reacted, then maybe he's really as he seems ....an ass!

Wow, that's all I can say. Have no hesitation about this chapter or this story, it is the best I have read in a while. I can't wait till the next chapter to find out what happens between Harry and Draco as well as the Thomas'. At first Ithoughthe boy was Draco's brother and than Draco was going to have a kid a leave it there, I surprised Harry didn't flashback to the Dursleys. Please continue soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter.