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I'm really enjoying your story. It's well written and yes, the way that Draco moods swings, he does remind me of a girl sometimes, but then he wouldn't be Draco otherwise. Well done.

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AWESOME!Thanks for updating! i can just see a baby demiguise eating Draco and harry's hair! SO cute!

could you get rid of the whole fred dies thing, plz? i love the twins too much, and don't care for DH anyway. thanx ever so!

OMG I absolutely love it!!! That is what I would have done with the Demiguise if I had written it. You did a wonderful job!!! *squeals and jumps around* I love this story and everyone involved!!!!

HOW DARE YOU JUST STOP IT RIGHT THERE!? Hahaha sorry didn't mean to yell! I just really like this story! Please update soon!

Yeah updates!! I know it was just filler, but hey, every story needs filler, and it was amazing filler, and that makes it ok. I love everything about this story, and I'm begging you to update again soon.

loved the update cant wait for four

I love it. You did a good job especially being sick. It does need to be beta'd of course. Maybe the next chapter you do will be a little easier and less stressful. I hope you get better soon.

more please!

Nice chapter, I liked all of the background information on both of them...this gives us a great idea of history and where to go. You have done a good job laying the ground work for the sexual tension...its obvious that they are both aware of each other sexually and are still disgusted yet intrigued at the same time...One thing I want to comment on is that (I know that there is a term for this and I can't remember what it is) you change your tense. You used third person and then you go to first person. "He wanted to snog Harry," versus, "I mean he was only nineteen years old". It confuses the reader a bit. It should be consistant, one or the other and since the rest of the story is third person you should get rid of all the "I" statements. You used air for "heir" and there was a couple of other things that I don't remember, but all in all it was wonderful...especially for someone who is sick with pneumonia...I hope that we didn't pressure you to much to get the chapter out, and I really hope that you get better soon! Great job!