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for It's Just 12 Inches of Wood

by TheCoven

person TheCoven
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, Scorpio!!! GREAT chapter!!! And you whipped THIS out in two or three days!!! I LOVE IT! Thanks for the hot action...*whimper* But you're right...can't have them getting all hot and heavy TOO soon. We are, after all, a bunch of angsty Draco-torturers...*sigh*

Just wanted to say that you're amazing, love!

~Graballz
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I do prefer this version of chapter 5, but I'm going to miss the Occamy. I can see why you changed it, the old chapter kinda changed the personalities of the characters and this is far more in line with the story thus far. Anyways, lovin' it and hope you update soon.
person Silver
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see the story is back up. This new chapter was great! I can't wait for the next one. =3
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! this version is WAAAYYYYYYYYY more cohesive :) absolutely perfect! but don't leave us hanging...update soon please! :D
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I like this chapter better. They are more in character in this one. Hahahahahaha! I loved that Harry was attacked by a shirt! That must be embarassing. Nice touch with the pub only being seen by gay/bisexual wizards/witches. Very hot...I'm sort of wondering maybe Harry might experiment a little...it would be very hot! Please update soon! Loved the remake!
person graballz
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I guess it's about damn time that I reviewed our own fucking story...

Ch 1-Zoo-YAY!! This was such an amazing beginning!!! Seriously! The English thing aside (damn you, Hexfiles!) it was really well-thought-out and I had no idea what to expect from this story...until I read your chapter and then I was afraid I wouldn't be able to compare!!! This was exactly what we needed to get started!!!

Ch 2-SS-OMG, woman!!! Talk about putting on the pressure!!! The first adventure started out amazingly!! For your next chapter, don't worry about it being "too long"!!! This was AWESOME and again...scared of not meeting expectations!!!

Ch 3-Sly-I'm so glad you got into their heads and put this down!!! I think this really helped with the background of the story and helped people to understand how Harry and Draco are in this story! It doesn't matter that it didn't further the plot! I think it really helped!

Ch 4-me-Okay, I'll give it to you. The baby Demiguise and Draco was super cute. Good job, you wanker.

Ch 5-me (and another)-Okay, well, nicely done, ya fuck-up! You certainly could've handled THAT better, but now I guess you know for next time.

Ch 6--Let's get it up and out!!! SOON!
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I'm hooked. Thanks W^^
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how this will go. Gotta go now and read chappie 3. Ta Ta. W^^
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh la la, getting better and better. Off the chapter 4. W^^
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just Wow, gotta move on to 5 now. You guys are doing wonderfullly. W^^