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OMG! Just when it gets good between them, Draco has to go an open his big mouth! lol. I really love this story and I can't wait to read more. And poor Harry, he didn't get to have a go. Draco is definitely being a git.

This is turning into a very interesting story and I can't wait for the next update to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!! :)

Oh my god!!! More, I need more now, or I will die. Bloody fabulous chapter.

OMG that was sooo good. very passionate, both in bed and in anger. you all are truly brilliant. BTW. I told you I'd write a better review after sleep.

5 is better than old. liked killer shirt. continue. will talk like human again after sleep. sorry. better review next time. later...

what happened to the occamy?? i thought they were in this story??

Ah, an original story idea! How refreshing. I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

poor things are confused,nice!

I loved chapter 6! It was brilliant! I loved the scene with the chips and ketchup...very nicely done. The ending was a shocker, and kind of fun. The sexual tension in the next chapters is going to be amazing if someone doesn't have them consumate their relationship. Hopefully that won't happen to quickly. I have been watching for updates on this story and hoping that the trials and tribulations of authors working togehter could be overcome. Its nice to see that with chapters 5 and 6 you seemed to have gotten it togehter. The second chapter 5 was fantastic and fit with the story so much better than the first. I know, no comparissons, but you can't help but do it. Its like the difference between taco bell and crab legs. one is edible if you must, but the other is so much better.

very good rewrite of the chapter SP. You did an amazing job in such short notice, and made it completely your own. Must admit, getting kind of nervous after reading the first chapters how mine will turn out.
~tas