rate_review Reviews

I have to be honest with you regarding chapter 6. When it was first posted, I loved it. I started reading this story because chelleybelle was writing on it and I have followed all of her other stories. I can tell by the writing style change that she is not the one who edited this chapter. I do not like what you guys did. I hate reading vulgar swear words. I like it when you have a sexy scene that your imagination wraps around without it being ruined by the swear words. I also hate the fact that you turned Draco into a cry baby. He's gay, he's not a woman. The crying scene did not work for me at all. I thought that it was much better when Harry left Draco there, not the other way around. Draco was the ass, Harry had every right to leave him there. Personally, I think that you took a pretty good chapter and ruined it. Chapter 7 may have been short, but it was excellent. It was very well written and draws the reader in, waiting for more. I hope who ever has been doing your editing doesn't ruin it.

Ah....excellent chapter. Poor draco and Harry. Stubborn gits! Update soon!

It was a little short for my liking but it was a nice chapter. I've always loved Draco, in fanfiction and the real JKR books. He's been one of my favorite characters from the first time I read about him, regardless of what side he chose to be on. Besides, he did the right thing in the end I suppose. :) Anywho, I'm rambling now. I look forward to reading more!!!

I forgot to mention that review was for Ch.7. Have a happy day! :)

Yes please, more. Your idea of having Harry still be a hero but in a different way is very appealing. Like you, I do not see him settling down to a peaceful life or being an Auror. Draco's role is good too. How long can you keep the tension and misunderstanding up. Please send them on at least one mission where they are reconciled and look out for each other.

I bow in grattitude! It's ok that is short, because it's good. And thank you for telling me how often it will be updated...I was starting to bite my nails again! :) (Man, I need a life!)

Dear whomever it may concern,
i am very seriously waiting for updates!!! i feel the fangirl in me crying out and i fear what will happen if i do not get updates SOON!!! i am trying to be nice here because i like you all because you all are brilliant writers. but...UPDATE!!!!! thank you very much and ALL MY LOVE!!!

Updates!!! I need more updates! I swear this gets better w/ every chapter!

Oh those two!!! I sooo need chapter 7!

That's okay about the reviews and all. I forgot to check for updates on this and when I looked back over Ch. 5 I did notice something wasn't right, but like I said, it's been so long that I completely forgot about the sirens until I read the author's note. I really loved this chapter though. More Harry/Draco action. Woot! lol. I loved the whole entire section starting at McNair's house. Brilliant!!!! I'm off to read Ch. 6 now!!!