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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay happy update!!!
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I don't really care for the grovelling, subservient Severus, but of course I understand why he has to be written that way in relation to Voldemort, and you wrote it very well indeed. Makes me subconciously brace myself to be squicked again in the next chapter, as we all know how "fond" of Severus Voldemort is......(EwwwwwShudder!!) I like it that you're portraying Ron as being rather brave here (going to get Severus, rushing into the room to help even though he's uncomfortable about it) instead of the usual dense, unreasonable, goofball sidekick he's frequently portrayed as, and I think it's a nice touch to reward him with kisses from Hermione (at least he's getting something! Poor Ron....never gets laid!) As always, your writing only makes me crave more, so, update soon please!! (Or I'll find that friend of yours and make her start nagging you again!)
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Sev...Update again soon!!
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't. You. DARE. touch the smut!!!! STAY AWAY FROM THE SMUT!!! It's HOT and horny, needful Snarry goodness and if you change a thing, I swear I'll never review again! I mean it!!
Seriously, it doesn't need to be tweaked or edited or anything. It's perfect. I loved Harry's helpless abandon, Hermione's embarassment, and Ron's quick escape to find help. Yay Ron!! And then of course, theres the pause.... "You ask so nicely."... Brilliant!!! I loved it all, as fabulous as I've come to expect from you. Promise you'll never stop writing, and I promise to never stop reading.
Oh yeah...and btw....give your friend a big thanks for nagging you into updating, won't you!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still haven't found out what's wrong with him...Have we? Or maybe I just completely missed it...Hmmm...That's entirely possible. Anyway, awesome chappie, update again soon!!
P.S. I don't think anyone is going to complain that that chapter was almost pure smut, what do you reckon? :)
P.S. I don't think anyone is going to complain that that chapter was almost pure smut, what do you reckon? :)
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ummm is he in heat? just a wild guess cant wait update please
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! It is the effects of the bonding, wether or not it worked. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please update soon. thanks
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is he feeling Snape's feelings?? Or Ron and Hermy's??
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Puppy, Puppy, Puppy...you and your little cliffie thingies......you revel in torturing your readers, don't you? I can picture you now, sitting in the corner.... snickering evilly, dreaming up new ways to drive us all insane. Bad Puppy!!! *searches for newspaper*
Seriously, frustration aside, another great chapter to set us all wondering. I have no idea what's happening to Harry. Severus is dreaming of shagging him silly and their minds are connected? Harry's got his memory back and his lust for Sev is such that he cannot help wantonly bucking his hips like mad? He's faking a convulsion to get shot of Ron and Hermione because their snogging has made him horny as hell and he can't wait to find a quiet corner and wank? All I can say (with the utmost love and snark) is, go on then, take your sweet time updating and keep me in suspense for a REALLY long time, because you know how much an anally retentive personality such as myself simply LUUURRRRVES being driven mad. I adore it! Don't update soon! Let me go completely round the bend! *goes off to tear out own hair and pout*
Seriously, frustration aside, another great chapter to set us all wondering. I have no idea what's happening to Harry. Severus is dreaming of shagging him silly and their minds are connected? Harry's got his memory back and his lust for Sev is such that he cannot help wantonly bucking his hips like mad? He's faking a convulsion to get shot of Ron and Hermione because their snogging has made him horny as hell and he can't wait to find a quiet corner and wank? All I can say (with the utmost love and snark) is, go on then, take your sweet time updating and keep me in suspense for a REALLY long time, because you know how much an anally retentive personality such as myself simply LUUURRRRVES being driven mad. I adore it! Don't update soon! Let me go completely round the bend! *goes off to tear out own hair and pout*