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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow loving every moment of it! i will not beleive he's dead nooo! cries
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you horrid, HORRID woman!!! You and your blasted cliffhangers!!! *weeps for Sev* Poor Sev! Poor Harry! Poor us readers victim to your cruel ways!!!
Seriously....I had tears in my eyes over the killing (again!) of Severus Snape. Your description of Nagini's bite to Severus's throat was much more graphic than the canon version. Nagini bites Severus in canon, in your story she tears a chunk out of his throat and it's all the more devastating. *sniff*
As always, your writing is very evocative; the last line in particular, which made me picture the scene in the fim version of GOF, in the graveyard, of Harry behind the tombstone as Voldemort calls him out to die...and the look of strength, bravery, and grim determination on Harry's face...that coupled with the scene in DH in the Great Hall, the final confrontation, when Harry addresses Voldemort by his given name. Again, your great knack of weaving canon and your own original work so seamlessly comes through here especially.
And then...the "point to ponder" part.....Nagini...just exactly where IS she anyway? Hmmmmmm.....
Please, I beg of you, Mist.......*ahem*.....Erm......Update immediately, Wretched Woman! Or suffer the consequences!!! Grrr!
Seriously....I had tears in my eyes over the killing (again!) of Severus Snape. Your description of Nagini's bite to Severus's throat was much more graphic than the canon version. Nagini bites Severus in canon, in your story she tears a chunk out of his throat and it's all the more devastating. *sniff*
As always, your writing is very evocative; the last line in particular, which made me picture the scene in the fim version of GOF, in the graveyard, of Harry behind the tombstone as Voldemort calls him out to die...and the look of strength, bravery, and grim determination on Harry's face...that coupled with the scene in DH in the Great Hall, the final confrontation, when Harry addresses Voldemort by his given name. Again, your great knack of weaving canon and your own original work so seamlessly comes through here especially.
And then...the "point to ponder" part.....Nagini...just exactly where IS she anyway? Hmmmmmm.....
Please, I beg of you, Mist.......*ahem*.....Erm......Update immediately, Wretched Woman! Or suffer the consequences!!! Grrr!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cries* yay this story is kick ass
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah...:) Update soon!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course the answer is "tiara"! D'oh! Only an idiot such as myself would completely mis-read and then misunderstand what you wrote.
*struggles to maintain dignity after all the whinging she did*
And the plot thickens.
I must applaud you on the way you've taken the canon story and meshed it in with your own original work. Very clever and intriguing; just when you're going along to canon and I think I know where you're headed, you veer off the beaten path seamlessly and I find myself avidly devouring your original work. Just when I think I've seen the light as to where that will lead, I realise I'm back in the canon story. The "key point" here is "seamlessly", and that's the beauty of it. You've woven it all together into one smooth and silky story that is rich in detail, subtle hints and clues, and is a luxury to read.
And that, IS magic.
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your stuff
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright, YOU!!!! I've been sitting here all day trying to suss out this chuffin' riddle!!! A RIDDLE!!! For the love of God woman, haven't you tortured us ENOUGH?!?!?
And I don't know who you think you're fooling; we all KNOW Ron is just going to trot back to Hermione and ask HER to figure it out! Grrrrrrr!
Freaking riddle frustration aside....nice chapter! (hawhaw!)
Seriously, I felt so bad for Severus, made to grovel....and then made to submit to more Ewww!ScalyCockSmut, and just after having had Harry after so long!!! And poor Harry having to watch it in his head!! THAT'S an afterglow killer if there ever was! Nice evocative writing for the vomiting by the way; I had no trouble whatsoever visualising THAT thank you very little! (Bleargh!) Erm....anyway...again, great writing both in style and in sustenance, and as it's Snarry and they're back together, the subject isn't bad either! (Minus, of course, the Ewww!ScalyCockSmut) Update soon, please, and relieve us from the misery of that blasted!riddle, and all your "key points"!
Here's a "key point" for you-----> You're driving me crazy! Now update!!
And I don't know who you think you're fooling; we all KNOW Ron is just going to trot back to Hermione and ask HER to figure it out! Grrrrrrr!
Freaking riddle frustration aside....nice chapter! (hawhaw!)
Seriously, I felt so bad for Severus, made to grovel....and then made to submit to more Ewww!ScalyCockSmut, and just after having had Harry after so long!!! And poor Harry having to watch it in his head!! THAT'S an afterglow killer if there ever was! Nice evocative writing for the vomiting by the way; I had no trouble whatsoever visualising THAT thank you very little! (Bleargh!) Erm....anyway...again, great writing both in style and in sustenance, and as it's Snarry and they're back together, the subject isn't bad either! (Minus, of course, the Ewww!ScalyCockSmut) Update soon, please, and relieve us from the misery of that blasted!riddle, and all your "key points"!
Here's a "key point" for you-----> You're driving me crazy! Now update!!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! That's not a really great thing to see. the answer to the riddle is tiara. I really like this story. Please continue your great work.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it...The letter 'a'?
Btw, that was very squicky, and poor Harry, having to witness it (I think?) Ugh!
Update soon!!
Btw, that was very squicky, and poor Harry, having to witness it (I think?) Ugh!
Update soon!!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Is Harry pregnant again?