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schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person Jilliane
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You had me worried there! I'm so glad niether had to leave the other behind! And the hot shag on the platform.....whew!!! Only....Dumbles wasn't watching, was he?? Cause..ewwwww! I understand you're sad to see the end of your story coming, I am too, but I'm so anxious to find out what happens, AND to see if Harry gets his wish, so please, hurry up and write and post! And write and post, and WRITE and POST!!!!!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter = "save me from the nothing I've become", yes? :D

My email address is: disturbedpie@hotmail.com

Update soon!!
person Makovaso
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
person Jilliane
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a cliffhanger. There's a surprise!

Again nice, evocative writing with Hermione slipping in the blood, mistaking Sev for a pile of gore and blood. Very ewww, but very good. I like it that Harry would choose death with Sev over life without him....or will he? Hurry up, Oh Evil One, and let us know!!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Cliffie!!!!! Update soon!!

P.S. Next chapter...Bid My Blood to Run? Or...Something to that effect :)
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! SEVERUS CANNOT BE DEAD!!!!! NOOOOO :( Update soon...
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and is the next chapter gunna be called "Save me from the dark"? Or something like that? :)
person Jilliane
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well.....erm....."Sweet Puppy"....at the risk of sounding like I'm just tagging along after you in sycophantic awe.....

This chapter made me cry.....I don't know who to feel sorrier for, Severus or Harry. The ending to this chapter was bittersweet and moving, well written. I don't want this story to end, I'm afraid of what may be coming next, but at the same time, can't wait to see what you do with the story and how you write it.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Tear* How sad :( Update soon!