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for Bitch

by longxlostx

person Tearle
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn. This was interesting, engaging, and HAWT right off the bat in just three chapters. I'm sad you never went any futher.
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLASE PLEASE FINSIH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting read so far. keep it up! and please e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com once you've updated. i'll really like to read more from you! keep it up! and thanks in advance! :)
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't need an explanation, I got exactly what your story was portraying. And I'm loving it. Keep up the good (or should that be 'naughty' work). :)
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good, I like it so far. But there's one inconsistency that I've noticed and that's that you keep saying how Hermione wants to talk to Dumbledore about things, but you said he was dead in the first chapter, but you keep referring to him as though he were still headmaster. Anyway, it was just a little confusing. I can't wait to see where you take this, and I hope to read more soon!
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice update/story.
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
also, about dumbledoor. I'm pretty sure she means talk to his portrait, which is the portrait for her common room. right?
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Keep up the good work. :)
person luvhp
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes I loved it!!!
Okay, I see what you're saying about Draco wanting her in every possible way, to dominate her, to love her, to rule her to concede to her eventually :)
And hello, how many 17 yr old virgins don't give in when they're being seduced! ;) Hell, how many 17 yr old virgins are even left in the world?? And if you want to get technical, Hermione is 18 in her 7th year ;)
All the more reason to enjoy her desires!!!