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Chapter 1 One-shot: Now THIS was a hot Lucius tale. Realistic, lovely descriptions of the surroundings, the study, and...woo-hoo, Lucius' clothing. I was ready to jump his bones myself. Hermione was dressed and then undressed beautifully, too. I loved their relaxed conversation and how you moved them from polite talking into intense, erotic f**king that was hotter than the Sahara in June. You just do such delectable smut. A true talent. This Lucius was so soignee and cultured and then you gave him bare feet. Be still my heart. Hermione was sooo lucky to have stumbled into the Slytherin's lair and been confident enough to entice him into showing her his vaunted expertise at sex. And did he ever! Great job!!

Happy birthday! If you get your birthday wish, let me know where to get my own for January.

I'll admit, I was a little leery when I read the title; I've read another Hermione/Lucius story with the same title, only it was based off of that song, Stacey's Mom. Needless to say, I didn't care for it.

Your story, on the other hand, worked quite well. It was well-written, and everyone seemed reasonably in-character (though the thought of Lucius allowing a night of debauchery in his manor is unlikely, I can see him doing it for Draco).

HAPPY BIRTHDAY Chicken!!!! Another fab and fun story from you. I know you need to sleep but I love it when you write so much. We haven't spoken in a while (remember i'm the teacher and we were talking about the brilliance of your son) hope all is well. Got my ticket for London the other day Yah!! Keep churning out these fab stories 'cause I'll always be reading them. Sorry I haven't reviewed in ages but will from now on. Have a wonderful Birthday, wish I could give you Lucius as a pressie (sorry I won't share Severus with anyone).

I loved it. Awesome, tasty... and well written.... Sad it didn't last longer, but nice anyway!

Great story! Great job!

always enjoy a story like that. short sweet and too the point. hope you write more. happy birthday.

BRILLIANT WRITING! I did think initially along the lines of American Pie, but this was far better! (Not that it would take much to be a bit better than that film, but this was MANY times better).

Hermione Stumbling upon the little sanctuary was rather expected; most people presume she isn't one for sex, drugs and rock and roll parties. however, it wasn't obvious that she was looking for company, just somewhere quiet to rest her feet.

Lucius's opening words, asking if she was lost, suggests that others have stumbled upon his solitude at some point.

One thing I did love, and its probably the most insignificant detail - but Hermione's knickers matched her dress! I'd have just had some plain white ones on under it, rather than bothering to go out and match the colour to the outer garments!

The sex was believable and didn't leave the reader with any misconceptions - it was noting more than sex, not making love, no emotions involved, just a meaningless f**k.

The morning after was amusing, I'd love to have seen Draco's face as he walked in to find his Dad with scratches down his back and a bed partner he'd have NEVER expected! I think Harry and Ginny had enough alcohol clouding their brains - the reaction was rather passive. (Thank Goodness Ron didn't witness it! He's carried a torch larger than the one at the Olympics for years!)

Her in his shirt was also a nice touch - evidently he was gentleman enough to let her sleep in something more comfortable; but there is something about wearing your boyfriends shirt that makes them really happy - a sign of ownership or something caveman!

10/10, a nice little one shot - and I don't think it could realistically be continued without spoiling the spontaneous nature of the one shot.

Oh, and Happy Birthday!
MANY HAPPY RETURNS!

Happy Birthday to you! Wow! Excellent bday gift to give yourself!

Just delicious! Happy Birthday to you! x4. And if anyone truly deserves the L/S sandwich, it is you -- but only if you promise to write about it!

And what a happy birthday!