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for I'm Trying Not To Fall Apart

by JLynnTheJewel

person naruske
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this storie plzz post more
person Stormy
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*growls* Write more NOW!!! put down the cookie..what? you dont have one? oo...*hands you a cookie*(thats for the awesome story..) put down the cookie and TYPE!!!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good and kind of funny. I loved it. Keep up the fantastic work.

Kat
person anniea
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don't you dare blush! that was amazing, so who tops? harry or draco? update soon *kisses*
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2! What does the response say? Surely Harry wouldn't be cruel.
person Dezra
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cliff hangers are not nice
person Dezra
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was some dream, will that affect how Draco's letter is written?
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo disappointed in Harry! *sigh* Though personally I was expecting a 'No way in Hades' kind of reply! Sooo need chapter 3!
person LoveGD
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liking it alot so far! Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
person badamire
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are leaving out a lot and so the story makes no sense at all. One--Draco's parents were filthy rich and Dray had his own vault. Two--Even if the Ministry took their money, why didn't anyone (Draco, Tom, and now Harry) report the DE's that are located at Malfoy Manor so they could be taken care of?