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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hermione please let it be hermione
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Between the two my vote is Ginny. That she-lion has a temper on her befitting the crow characters once they are brought back, not to mention if the death eaters just torched her parents, one of her brothers, her sister in law, and her FUTURE sister in law, that should be more than enough incentive for a little crow-esque revenge.
However if you are intent on casting Harry in the role of 'Sarah' I would suggest Sirius, already dead and has plenty of incentive to come back to protect Harry from Snape, Deatheaters, and anything else, also has the slightly unhinged thing already going for him.
FYI I LOVED the Voldie/Nagini City of Angels reference, sooo fitting! But may I also make a suggestion to not follow the first movie quite so closely? Not only does it make a lot of the HP characters VERY ooc, but all the word for word quotes/scenes kills your own originality and kinda makes you look like a copycat. I'm not saying it's plagiarism, because you don't claim it as yours and give props to the original story, but at the same time, the tone of both plots is vastly different, the jumping back and forth between them only breaks the flow of the story, and it takes away from your own writing.
If I wanted to see one of the original stories, there is no lack of James O'Barr in my house. I have all the comics, the novels, the TV show and all four movies. But I want to read YOUR Crow story, not 'The Crow, the revised edition with _____ in the role of _____'. Let's see how you make your own Crow appear in the HP world and exactly what reason's it's given to come back and seek revenge/redemption, and how it affects the ones whose lives it touches/protects/changes. I'll be waiting eagerly to read YOUR story because you seem to have some interesting ideas. ^_^ Go Vampy Snape!
However if you are intent on casting Harry in the role of 'Sarah' I would suggest Sirius, already dead and has plenty of incentive to come back to protect Harry from Snape, Deatheaters, and anything else, also has the slightly unhinged thing already going for him.
FYI I LOVED the Voldie/Nagini City of Angels reference, sooo fitting! But may I also make a suggestion to not follow the first movie quite so closely? Not only does it make a lot of the HP characters VERY ooc, but all the word for word quotes/scenes kills your own originality and kinda makes you look like a copycat. I'm not saying it's plagiarism, because you don't claim it as yours and give props to the original story, but at the same time, the tone of both plots is vastly different, the jumping back and forth between them only breaks the flow of the story, and it takes away from your own writing.
If I wanted to see one of the original stories, there is no lack of James O'Barr in my house. I have all the comics, the novels, the TV show and all four movies. But I want to read YOUR Crow story, not 'The Crow, the revised edition with _____ in the role of _____'. Let's see how you make your own Crow appear in the HP world and exactly what reason's it's given to come back and seek revenge/redemption, and how it affects the ones whose lives it touches/protects/changes. I'll be waiting eagerly to read YOUR story because you seem to have some interesting ideas. ^_^ Go Vampy Snape!
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GINNY!! A evil red-headed Wesley would be great, and she already is known for her Temper and cruelty while casting hexes.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I am a bit confused at the two different plots, I'm intrigued to know more. ::MV::
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you will finish this story-please e-mail me if you decide not to and i realy hope that you do. I want to know about y they are life mates and if sev is going to be mean the hole story- i hope not i hope that they get together in the end but its not my story i cant wait to read more.
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to try and not be critical, LOL, because I am a die hard Crow fan. So, with that said...it has potential to be very good. Combining the movie 'The Crow' and Harry Potter, it's not going to be an easy task on anyone. You need to develop the relationship between Harry and Severus just a little more. Thrusting them together without a detailed background might confuse the readers. You have a good start. I think with a bit more story, background, and character development, it could be great. I will keep reading just to see what you do with the characters :) ::MV::
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH, and congrats on being the 1000th Snarry Story author. ^.~
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting, I would love for you to continue this. Maybe it was a little rushed at the end, I sort of got a little confused but perhaps you can explain more later in the chapters? Well, good luck. I just LOVE vampire Snape....*Thinks* Hmmm, sexy.....*Drools*
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ood, But good. ^.^ i like...
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well thats a bitter sweet begining! cnat wait to see what will happen next! up-dates soon please!