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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic story I loved every bit of it. I know I am not that good at reviews what I want to say I just can't get it to come out right. Anyway I just wanted to say what a great writer I think you are. The ending was perfect Thank you for putting this story out for all to read.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot awesome story!
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so tragically raw and beautiful your ending. But I'm glad there's humor thrown in to make it not so bleak. The death of Tomtom is a bittersweet thing. Personally, I love the line that went something like: 'My dear, my love, ....I ate your pies(?)' Ok, exageration, but great line.
And it's shaping up to be a happy ending.
Even for Jack. Does my heart good. See, Severus would totally be a responsible pet owner, not that Jack is a pet, but you know those people who get an animal and then get rid of it for stupid reasons (ok, I can't think of too many non stupid reasons to get rid of a family member), I don't see him doing that either. So keeping Jack is like making sure the family dog comes too. And the masses rejoiced.
And it's shaping up to be a happy ending.
Even for Jack. Does my heart good. See, Severus would totally be a responsible pet owner, not that Jack is a pet, but you know those people who get an animal and then get rid of it for stupid reasons (ok, I can't think of too many non stupid reasons to get rid of a family member), I don't see him doing that either. So keeping Jack is like making sure the family dog comes too. And the masses rejoiced.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww :') it makes me happy and sad at the same time. [sniff sniff] Poor Remus and Tonks. and huray to Snape and Kathy.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ending.
Their powers merging is a fitting tribute to their union as man and wife. I love a good 'healing Severus' story, and she healed him more than just physically. Well done.
I LOVE the description of that little monster Severus the child. Oooh, I can so totally see it. What a handful, and yet, so completely unsurprising. My mom used to say by way of blessing/curse, "May you have three children just like you when you grow up." Oddly - she only said that really when we were acting up... No, it's pefectly fitting that Sev raise a hellion. But he did grow up to do well. Nice.
Ah, the 'puter business. I'm currently usurping my husband's laptop - which he grumbles about nonstop. My desktop took the nosedive, and that had all my files on it. The replacement I purchased no kidding blinked out of existance yesterday when I slaved the old harddrives, meaning all my tears are possibly a result of a particularly nasty virus. Monday is a national holiday here, so earliest I can get either in the shop is Tuesday. Until then my hubby is just going to have to deal with his laptop missing.
Ccino- bloody brilliant story as usual. I love your heroines, they have such depth of character. Even Kathy who, was for you quite timid really came into her own and developed so beautifully. I love that they are never stock characters who don't grow/develop. I will wait patiently for the Grindelwald story knowing it will be fantastic. I can only hope it's another time turner to the 1940s. I would so love to see Mister Snape dressed out in the era.
Their powers merging is a fitting tribute to their union as man and wife. I love a good 'healing Severus' story, and she healed him more than just physically. Well done.
I LOVE the description of that little monster Severus the child. Oooh, I can so totally see it. What a handful, and yet, so completely unsurprising. My mom used to say by way of blessing/curse, "May you have three children just like you when you grow up." Oddly - she only said that really when we were acting up... No, it's pefectly fitting that Sev raise a hellion. But he did grow up to do well. Nice.
Ah, the 'puter business. I'm currently usurping my husband's laptop - which he grumbles about nonstop. My desktop took the nosedive, and that had all my files on it. The replacement I purchased no kidding blinked out of existance yesterday when I slaved the old harddrives, meaning all my tears are possibly a result of a particularly nasty virus. Monday is a national holiday here, so earliest I can get either in the shop is Tuesday. Until then my hubby is just going to have to deal with his laptop missing.
Ccino- bloody brilliant story as usual. I love your heroines, they have such depth of character. Even Kathy who, was for you quite timid really came into her own and developed so beautifully. I love that they are never stock characters who don't grow/develop. I will wait patiently for the Grindelwald story knowing it will be fantastic. I can only hope it's another time turner to the 1940s. I would so love to see Mister Snape dressed out in the era.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a great chapter I am so glad they will be together
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm having a hard time with a poor Snape left behind to worry about Kathy. Hurry up woman!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's great he shrunk all his clothes and forgot the soap. Made her dree turn gray that was such a good part. Now I just have to see how he will tell kathy about Albus that is going to be so hard for him.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter I am really going to miss reading it when you are all done I may just have to start over with it later on.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok now you made me so sad I think I am just going to cry. I so hope you will not end it there I will then for sure cry.