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by ccino49

schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww ...almost feel sorry for tom... hmm must be pretty tempting to throw him in front of a run away carrige though lol. can't wait to find out how kathy of past and present fit togather is the kathy he goes to when he's injured still techinically in the past or does she some how end up in present day to finish growing up. anywho can't wait to read more
person pittwitch
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My my my, your imagination running to the past this time, whoo hoo ... we're in for a ride.
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Chap 3 was definitly a surprise. Changes quite a bit doesn't it.
person Jackie
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot! i love a protective Tom. its cute. and Rosie's dialogue made me smile! ^_^
person LaDySiN
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...Looking forward to see where you'll take it.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing idea - I love the thought of a time-travelling Severus.

So much can happen with this!
person Kathrin
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's sounds interesting.
Actually it is quite difficult to read a fanfiction in english.
I hope you will go on with your story.
i think I will like it.
Kati
person Tiff
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the start of a great story please keep it up
person jackie
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love how you write! i can see things so vividly. i'm curious now... please continue! please! there's a cookie and a juicebox in it for you! ^_^
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kathy's an interesting character, I like that she's a bit of a scatterbrain, though there might be something blocking her to make her that way. I'm actually much more curious about how time is moving, how long the pause between his/her memories of SS's 'death' and his arrival in her living room. Great wind up, lots of loose threads to tie up. Can't wait to read how this develops.