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for Leech

by ccino49

schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kathy, remembering the feel of her babies in her arms :-(. So sad.

Severus might need to do something to control that leeching power of hers. Eek.
person Kathrin
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Ccino, I like your story.
Develloping a character like a leech is brillant.
Please, go on.

Kati
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A demand for reviews--bold, italicized, and underlined.....sounds serious.

Kathy Apparated? O.o That's interesting. And I can just see her happily humming as she cleans his jars of strange goos, odd creatures, and mangled body parts. Heh.

Eh....Dumbledore O.O
person pittwitch
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love Albus dousing the snarkmaster with ice cold water ... tee hee hee hee. Thanks for sharing, Pitt.
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, that's a nice childish game Severus and Dumbledore were playing there. :-P Wizard's revenge...

And I personally don't mind being spoiled with four chapters in two days. It's a good story and I request more. Now...

Cacoethes
person tiff
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 11 is so funny I love it. poor girl all this new stuff for her to freak about.
person Tiff
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how Albus is going to get Kathy caught up on all the years she misses and show her how to control her leeching. This is getting good.
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
4,5,6,7

A fairy...lol. Little Kathy was cute. And what an interesting trait (?) she has. But it's sad that she hurt her parents. Very sad. Anyway, I like this story. I should really keep up better. -.-

Cacoethes
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very intriguing - the talented Mrs Ripley has to trap Tom in some way, I'm guessing? I love your 30s and 40s period detail. And I love Sev being 'Sir Stephen Prince'. Shades of The Story of O? LOL.
person tiff
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for her. It's just so sad everyone she loves is gone.